Reviews for Cruel Fate
Liane Kennedy chapter 2 . 7/14/2021
So sorry that this didn't get finished. It is nicely written and has great flow... Don't expect that it will happen now, but if you still check here... Thanks for a good read.
Giselle chapter 2 . 12/28/2016
This is very good work. Flow is smooth. Nice opening. Hope that you are able to progress this.
Worst Person chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
I most definitely interested in this. This is one of the story plot I definitely like, besides, your English isn't bad
Jester79 chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
I just caught this today. Enjoying it very much. I really hope you continue writing this.
story chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
good start. It's not going to be the asshole who deflowers a virgin then leaves only to find out years later that she had his child then forces her to marry him for the child's sake. Woman who up to this point is a good strong hard working person suddenly loses all backbone and becomes s sniveling idiot whose so worried about losing her child she gives into the bullying. Even tho the child would not be taken off her even if they went to court the child only knew his mother as the so called father didn't even bother to stay around to say thank you.
bren43050 chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
Yes please continue
Love the story
gabbia97 chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
Please update soon! I'm excited for this story
Steph chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
I'm interested! Keep writing it sounds good so far.
HeyyyitsPickle chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
You really havent gotten any reviews? Thats ridiculous! I loved it and i have a hunch on who the CEOs gonna be lol. But really dont stop updating! Its really good, dont doubt that. It's just that some people dont like reviewing.
stephlorhaze chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
I really love the premise of this story, please continue and I promise I'll read it.
Hugs & kisses,
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
It is good! Don't worry, people are reading. Will try to drop some reviews too! I like that you didn't just dive into meeting the father in the second chapter. Keep it up!