they're in luurrrrvv! I'm a bit late to the party, but I still did my little happy dance when I saw you updated! Reading through their wedding day antics put a smile on my face-Morgan really *is* sweet. And Ben is Ben; it was cute to see him so protective of Morgan from his family, haha. Loved meeting Khosi and getting more of Karen. I really hope Meredith comes around soon-I know how it feels to be an overprotective older sister, so I'm just waiting for that moment when she realizes Morgan is worthy of her little brother.

Amazing work as always. Can't wait for more!

amazing l love it

I literally cried when I saw this new chapter thank you so much

The way Morgan and Ben are acting is exactly the way my two friends behave around each other. So god damn touchy. It's fucking cute, but I dont understand why are these two boys so touchy in this chapter. And I certainly didnt expect Ben to be the one touching Morgan's face and jawline in public because he is the more reserved one. It feels kinda weird.

I liked it, I have to agree with the guest though Meredith reaction was a little extreme. Maybe dial it back and put it a bunch of sighting instead? I don't know but I did like the chapter as a whole.

Gaaaaaah, finally!
Oh the feels these boys give... Love them! Really liked the chapter!

I didn't like Meredith's reaction to meeting Morgan though - not how it happened but the way you wrote it, the way you made her behave. Maybe there's a strong reason for such behaviour, such strong dislike, but it just felt... Way off and way too rude.

Anyway, please update soon! I'm loving this story.

Why does she hate Morgan so much, dang. Why is she such a bitter bitch at all? Like it seems like she’s jealous of anyone who takes away bens attention, and I’m getting a creepy incestuous vibe from her and idk if that’s your intention. I really wanted to punch her throughout this entire chapter lol. I don’t think I’ve ever acted like this towards any of my brothers friends. I can’t tell if it’s normal sibling behaviour

I was thrilled to see the notification in my email about a new chapter! This is so well written and it's adorable how they're falling for one another. I hope they recognize soon how much they mean to each other. :)

Mhmmmm it’s sooooooo perfect. I absolutely love the chemistry it’s just all so good.

Yes yes yes yes. I don't know how you do it. I don't know how you do it every time. I was wondering how the wedding day would play out, and this was . . . amazing. It's amazing.

I had to take a couple days after the update to re-read and then re-read again, because there's something about this chapter that made me feel so incredibly happy and satisfied, but I just didn't know what it was specifically. For the longest time, I couldn't quite put my finger on what it was, but as a fellow writer I was determined to figure it out so that I may one day mimic it in my own writing.

And I did, eventually, figure it out.

It's Morgan and Ben are touching each other in casual interactions in ways that would ordinarily be considered too fond or too intimate for just friends, simultaneously awkward and comfortable and tender with each other, making me wonder if this was a gradual thing. It's you doing such a wonderful job of setting the atmosphere by describing the scenery, the mood, and how beautiful they look against the backdrop of the river. It's Morgan desperately anxious to impress Ben's family, yet not knowing why.

I guess I'll stop here, but before I go, let me just say I don't mind the wait. I know that life gets in the way, and perfection takes time. Whatever the matter, like I said in my last review, I'll still be here supporting you. I AIN'T GOING NOWHERE.

One of my favourite original stories I follow atm. Those two are really head over heels for each other , but don't realise it. I wonder, if we get a real kiss at the wedding

This chapter was so good! I'm so freaking invested in their relationship that seeing them trying to deal with their feelings makes me laugh. They're such amazing characters! Also, I know everyone says it, but this is my favorite story on this whole site, and better than a lot of real books! Loved it~

I love those sparks flying between the two :D So many nice little moments :D :D

I'm enjoying each chapter. I look forward to the next one.

I wish we had Ben's pov here but Morgan's pov is just as good. I'll give myself one more chap before breaking down.