|Reviews for Young Heartbreak|
| Claire Gerdes chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
There isn't anything overtly bad about this piece, except in it's blandness. Luna, whom we know next to nothing about, experiences heart break over a boy we know absolutely nothing about. What's the point, why do I care? Likewise, the writing itself is lackluster and while not overtly bad, still not anything memorable or notable.
Valiant attempt, try again when you know what you're trying to accomplish.
All the best.