Reviews for The Realization: Chonicles of Shar #1
Indicates chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I hate to say that I had a very hard time reading this story. This story is more than 10 years old and I know I am not expecting large updates on this, but I did enjoy the opener and I wanted to continue reading the rest, if only to see what happens with the main character. Unfortunately, due to the text being humped together, I got some bad eyestrain. Still, I wonder how it could've been.
A.J Scarlet chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
Oh I likie...so who or waht is Adam's inner self? Can't wait for the update and I like the way you write too.
2Cool Girl 9 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
This was an EXCELLENT story! It was very interesting and I can't wait to read more. The only thing is...you need to spell check it and everything. I like the end especially where Angela and Aaron are foreshadowing what will happen next)