Reviews for Camelot |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD THIS IS THE BEST UNPUBLISHED STORY I'VE EVER READ! one small thing though. it seems as though marcus is a bit to powerful. in a good storry, no one should ever hold that much power. the intelligence level is fine, but the amount of physical strength he has eliminates a number of good possibilities for a plot. still an amazing story though! -The Devils Pen |
![]() ![]() Awesome. Thanks for uploading it for us to enjoy. You're an epic writer. |
![]() ![]() MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() re-reading |
![]() ![]() This is an awesome story! I hope you make this a trilogy or series. Again wonderful story. Thank you for all the time you put into this, as well as the rewrites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() noooooooooooooo it can't be the end...need to see Divergent get an even bigger butt whooping! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol...oh I can't wait to see Brian's tantrum when he figures out he didn't get away with the serum :P |
![]() ![]() Freaking awesome! More! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent story can't wait to have more. Good writing,arrangement and articulation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *high five Icon* :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() kick alien butt |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something tells me the higher up aliens will be coming soon... gun control *snicker* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Divergent gets taken down...very painfully |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ack cliffie! *.* *waits for more* |