Reviews for Socials
Hedonistic Opportunist chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
I think this is a promising opening, which is quite eye-catching - mostly because you present this accomplished girl who is facing a hard/difficult task (I like how she's treating it like a challenge; it makes her an intriguing character). I like that she's so matter of fact about while she's narrating it, showcasing an interesting sort of detachment, without alienating the reader. I like that you can already draw your conclusion about the girl - what she's like (proud, maybe too proud?); it leaves a lot of room for interpretation.

I like the writing too - it's simple but not too bland, with quite a few funny lines here and there. I especially like how you address the reader directly; it makes things more enjoyable.