Reviews for The Hitler youth
BobertPazzaz chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
So this is definitely interesting. Pretty good start. There is one thing I definitely would change though.

Add some spacing! The two monster paragraphs are very hard to read! And this was a pretty good story, you should make it look as great as it is :p

I'll be waiting for another update! I can't even wait to see where you take this!