Reviews for The Last One To See You Naked
DTF chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
This was great! Your story is so incredibly realistic! I feel terribly for those who have been heartbroken twice by the women they were infatuated with. It's absolutely wrong, but you wanted justice! Your story didn't end with a cliché "happily ever after"! You disobeyed the rules, and you seriously wrote the story of a heartbroken man! The cheater doesn't change. Ian goes off, sleeps with many women, eventually finds a pretty good one, and it ends uncertain but upbeat.

I've had this happen to many of my guy friends. It's just so wrong. I'm sure it happens to women too, but it's horrible when you watch a woman play with a man's heart. Just plan awful.

Thank you for writing your awesome story!

Deeper than Fathomless

PS: I'll add your story to my fav's later. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Excellent story shows that revenge can be sweet