Reviews for The Assassin
Riintheazure chapter 21 . 9/25/2017
I just found this amazing stories i've ever read. I finished it one day and got so much laughing and crying so badly in the end.

Oh my, i love this story so much! You are such as a great author.
laurin.violentika chapter 21 . 9/25/2017
I've been read this story twice and can't hold myself from crying reading this.. This story is really amazing and touching one. Wish you two would like to write more stories like this, except the sad ending.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/3/2014
So, I kept putting off reviewing, but I finally got around to it. I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story an do was really sad with the ending, but, the rest of the story almost makes up for that. Keep writing!
Brendan Aurabolt chapter 20 . 10/5/2014
"We have agreed on a certain number of comments/reviews/pm's that will dictate a continuation."

This is called holding the story hostage.

The only people you hurt when you do this is yourselves and that is because the people you piss off are readers like myself who know this tactic all too well. IT. NEVER. WORKS. And this will be the last story you write I ever read if you even think about doing it again.

Not against Fictionpress's Terms of Use biut should be.

That said, only 4 people have reviewed this story since it was first written: Myself, Kristna Fox and two guest reviewers. The last review before this one was on September 13. You're not going to get what you're asking for plain and simple.

So I will consider this the final chapter for now.

I liked the buildup to Garin's final showdown though I wish Rynz had been properly introduced sooner. There were two teases, yes but I mean a proper introduction. It felt like all you did was give "the ruthless assassin" a name in this chapter and it felt rushed. Both Rynz and Garin are assassins so from a certain point of view, he was just doing his job when he stabbed Nadia. It was nothing personal. You needed to do a better job of explaining why Rynz's methods are worse than Garin's. They're both trained killers, after all.

On the other hand, Nadia's story definitely needs to be continued. I have a few ideas in that regard on how it could look and will PM you the details.
Danielle Pokorny chapter 19 . 9/13/2014
I've been playing "catch-up" today with this story, and I'm kicking myself for not reading the last three chapters sooner! They were so good! I can't wait to read and find out who this new villain is.
Danielle Pokorny chapter 16 . 8/18/2014
Yay! Two new chapters for the price of one! Or at least, that's what it feels like to me. Anyways, I'm glad Garin and Nadia are finally together, and I'm interested to see how Javik and Garin do on missions.
Brendan Aurabolt chapter 16 . 8/17/2014
Well, damn O.O;

Garin only works alone though, right? I hope nothing goes horribly wrong O
Brendan Aurabolt chapter 14 . 8/15/2014
Well holy shit O.O

Talk about a bombshell!

The only possible way out of this that I can think of is the contractor is asssassinated. Please tell me that's a possability!
Danielle Pokorny chapter 14 . 8/15/2014
Between Javik's good news and Garin's decision, this chapter made me so warm inside! I do look even more forward to see how Nadia takes it, though, something tells me whether good or bad, her reaction will be confused with it.
Danielle Pokorny chapter 13 . 8/14/2014
Just got through reading the story so far, and I'll say this, I loved it! I'm so glad Garin is finally realizing his true feelings. Poor Nadia, though! She's so confused about them. Anyways, I can't wait to read more!
Danielle Pokorny chapter 10 . 8/13/2014
Poor Garin! Good thing Nadia was there to help him with his shoulder. Speaking of which, the dark humor involving how he hurt was great! I'm kind of a fan of black comedy myself. lol
Danielle Pokorny chapter 7 . 8/12/2014
Yay! I'm so glad to see Javik again! Kida sounds so adorable, though, I do wonder just how old she is if she doesn't have teeth but doesn't need a wet nurse, since I'm pretty sure my little cousin was on a mix of formula and baby food even after a few of her teeth had come in. However, I don't know if that's normal or if she was just a special case... I'm probably just overthinking it, I have a habit of doing that. ;
Danielle Pokorny chapter 5 . 8/12/2014
This chapter was really good, and I just love the healer. I do hope we'll get to see more of her in future chapters. I do feel so terrible for Nadia, though, after the revelation about the king. Hopefully there will be someone else in her life, if not Garin (although I hope it's with Garin), then Javik. I forgot to say how much I liked his character. Anyways, expect more reviews, if not tonight, then tomorrow.
Danielle Pokorny chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
I'm enjoying this story so far and plan to read the rest tomorrow. I promise to give more detailed reviews then. ;)
HaddieHo chapter 13 . 8/8/2014
Yay! A new chapter! I SO can't wait for the next to how Nadia's reaction ;3
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