Love makes people do things they normally wouldn't do, yes?

Damnit! I went to click to read the next chapter only to find that you haven't uploaded it yet. I was really REALLY getting into this story too!

Wow, so much revealed about The Order in this chapter. So AWESOME!

...It also seems to reveal some options Nadia could use to avoid being assassinated.

The Order is all powerful but answers to no one. Kinda like The Order in the Assassin's Creed games only they are less bound by tradition and more inclined to use common sense methods.

Sounds like the wrong kind of group to piss off XD

It's fascinating to learn about the Order and how it operates!

Looks like there's trouble on the horizon with the threat of possible war! I wonder how it will effect Garin and Nadia?

Poor Nadia! She has been working so hard and her back hurts! She wanted to finish her sewing project so bad!

This story keeps getting better and better with every chapter! I hope to read more of this story and find out what happens next!

Talk about a dysfunctional relationship XD

...Wait, wouldn't the simple thing be to just kill the king?

Please update, so excited to see how it evolves!

Aww...they make a good couple _

The attention to detail here is awesome. I'm interested in finding out what kind of "work" Garin ends up taking on XD

I'm also interested in seeing what his conflicting emotions leads to. Will he defy The Order and spare her life? Or will he still kill her after the baby's born? Assuming that happens, will he raise her child as his own?

The possabilities!

Can't wait to see what happens next.

A great start to what is looking to be an amazing tale! Will Garin finish his target off once she delivers, or will he betray the mysterious Order? Only the author(s) know!

Ah, the hilarity of the situation XD

I hope you update regularly _

I'm usually pretty fussy with what I read, but I love the way you write! Can't wait to read the rest :)

I have read to this chapter and love this story so far! I love how Garin does his best to put up with Nadia even though he's annoyed. I especially love his reaction to Nadia's toxic soup! I am compelled to find out whether or not Garin would actually go through with the assassination after the baby is born! I thank you both for writing this excellent story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great first chapter, eagerly looking forward to you updating soon! :D