Reviews for for the sake of you
Sha'Neekwa of the Sevateem chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
aww good poem
moonlight543 chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
I liked it. It was short, but I found the structure interesting and I thought you said all you used clever language and you picked the right places to start a new line. Well done!
The Beautiful Filth chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
I see this as a kind of laconic style, but it can convey the lifelessness that the persona feels.

lifeless.
drip.
fall.

-Christie