Reviews for The True Queen
Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 15 . 5/4/2015
You got a view mistakes that need fixing; but so far the chapter was good...
Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 14 . 4/25/2015
Keep rocking, rolling and writing...
Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 13 . 4/19/2015
I want to
Imnotchaos chapter 9 . 2/9/2015
I really wanted a cupcake after this chapter! lol
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Good beginning! I like it!
Sayris Iisa chapter 9 . 9/24/2014
Those weapons sound cool! I like the double scythe, it's my favourite _ and omg how could Eilish not like cupcakes :O
Sayris Iisa chapter 8 . 9/6/2014
Haha, the cheshire cat really didn't think about what he was doing when he put four assassins in the same room together lol, also i'm interested to learn more about Avalyn, could she possibly be a friend from the past?
Kcripep chapter 8 . 8/25/2014
aww...Eilish has a friend! WOOT WOOT
Kcripep chapter 7 . 8/25/2014
Eilish is badass...just love her
Sayris Iisa chapter 6 . 8/23/2014
Haha lol, Eilish and her band of kittens . so cute! Good chapter, can't wait to see what mischief the kittens will get up to.
Sayris Iisa chapter 5 . 8/18/2014
Nice chapter! It was very exciting :)
Kcripep chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
Not all my clients are big talking cats" loved that line :)
Kcripep chapter 2 . 8/17/2014
Great chapter! I love Eilish!
Sayris Iisa chapter 4 . 7/27/2014
OMG this story is awesome! Good job. I love Eilish she's such a badass.
Azela the Writer chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Is this interrelated with Alice Madness Returns? I think so. But I really like how you made the plot, characters, and the settings. And how you write it seems to be formal even with the dialogue. I can't do it that formally. When I tried my hand at writing a formal-type story, it ends up colloquial! I cannot manage it.

Keep it up and have a good day!
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