Reviews for The Animator
LittleDeadFly chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
There's a few issues in regards to the summary:

Anthropomorphism doesn't mean to bring inanimate objects to life (why is 'inanimate' in the summary in caps?), but adding human characteristics to something not human, such as an animal or an object. Regardless, the summary doesn't say much about the story, other than restating the same thing twice, and then the rest being an author's note. You want to write a summary that will get people reading your text.