|Reviews for Survival|
| DracoDraconis chapter 2 . 7/7/2014
Well, your story has a lot of potential, but the writing style is a little rough and there are a few grammatical errors. For example: it's woMAN singular and woMEN plural. Also I don't think that repeating the stats on how many women died, how many are fertile etc. is necessary. That was what the prologue was for.
Other than that, I love the idea, it seems really cool. . .but it does remind me a bit of the book series Chaos Walking (Patrick Ness, the first book is called The Knife).
| story chapter 1 . 7/3/2014