Reviews for Bracelets
blank account - not using chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
I really like this! (Personally, based on the structure, I would switch this to the Poetry section instead of Fiction. I just see this as a poem. :)) I really the how each new Bracelet can be contrasted and yet there is a lot of parallelism here too. The figurative language in the second to last part was great, yet super sad. I love the overall tone! :D
lilbabykiwi chapter 1 . 7/4/2014