Oh, gosh.
Nyx, I feel weird competing against this... Overconfident...
You'll win. This is so, so beautiful. Although it's not strictly tragedy, it's this faint dreamlike sad, wisp of a story. I love it.
(Did you have names for the little characters? I think of the little boy as a Henry, for some reason, and his brother as a Jonathan. I can't really say why.)
Great job. Hats off to you, Nyxie. :)

Sri

I can't read this again, even though it would help me review better. It's not because it's bad or because it has many errors, but because it's so fracking /sad/. I will admit I had to stifle my sobs because Bluebird threatened to punch me if I cried (she was next to me at the time).

...I ended up crying anyway.

It was beautiful. Homelessness makes me /so sad/ and then that little boy died. He was so young and maybe I didn't understand if there were hints or not, but I don't even know what caused him to die. I don't even know what caused the little girl to become homeless. I'm assuming she's either an orphan because her parents died, or her parents received an award for being the worst parents ever.

Anyway, I really liked this...even though it made me depressed. Good luck in the poll!

Cheers,
Gone

That was so sad but it was so well written. ;u; I loved the ending, even though it made me tear up. This was amazing. :')
Good luck in the poll!

-Sunny

Okay, so, my phone doesn't let me log in to FictionPress for some reason. Sorry about that.

First of all, I read this twice. The first time I read this I literally woke up maybe ten minutes before, so I didn't process what I was reading. But I just read it again, and I paid attention this time. xD

ANYWAYS, I liked this, Pencil-chan. There were some one-liners I was really fond of in this, so they sort of just sealed the deal for me. I don't know - I just find myself always liking the way you write your description, and that didn't change in this story.

*thumbs up*

musiclover3