|Reviews for A Reason To Forget|
| TimeTraveler4 chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
This was wonderful. It was clearly well edited and thought through. My only criticism is that last line. I think it's redundant because it's clear that she's in an asylum, therefore it doesn't really reveal anything.
I'm not sure if you were thinking about continuing this, but I think this would make a wonderful horror/thriller. You could build on the demon/monster idea, while also giving her some more sane moments. Maybe have her escape and figure out more about her past?
I don't know, maybe you were already thinking that. All I know is that I love your character and want to read more! :)
| REN4488X chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Very beautifully written. I loved how you gave a first person perspective on the character's mindset, who I would assume had a mental illness.