Reviews for Hiding in Plain Sight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My nickname is Merry too! I really like this, plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo, the blushes that came to my face when I saw my username. Lol I totally understand now why she would see her friends as perfect since it's from her point of view. And I was totally right! It was Casper! I'm so interested in seeing where this goes now. Also your chapters are quite a decent length. They don't keep me starving for your next update ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo, I bet that the guy she was talking to in the first chapter was Casper. Is he also gonna be her love interest? Hmm. You make her friends sound so perfect... It would have been nice to see some flaws, I guess. Overall, I liked it. Keep up the good work! My favourite bit was when the twins filled a condom up with glue LOL I'm gonna have to do that one day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've decided this is my new favorite story. Congrats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was interesting. Her family is royally fucked up. Please update this soon. I want to hear more about her life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. This is interesting. Like how it goes so far. Can't wait to read the next chap. Why exactly does her brother hate her as a person though? |