Reviews for A Trick of the Light |
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![]() ![]() Great update! Going to see what happens next now. |
![]() ![]() I like all your stories but I think I like this one best because she is just a human, albeit an extraordinary one. No special powers or senses. and I love that you placed it during the prohibition - very unique and an interesting time in America's history. Great story! |
![]() ![]() Love it! Update again soon. |
![]() ![]() All your stories are so good! I read this one straight through so please count this as 17 reviews. I couldn't stop and was always in a rush to get to the next chapter. I absolutely love the romance between Charlie and Matthew. It's so perfect and sweet. I can't wait for the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() Yes, an update! |
![]() ![]() Nice, the romance between Charlie and Matthew starts now. |
![]() ![]() Wow, getting really good. So, Charlie is planning on settling here? Hmm, kind of seems like Charlie and Nathaniel have something going. |
![]() ![]() Good start. Will see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() It's so great you didn't time the proposal to come after all the action. It's beyond refreshing that a proposal wasn't used to wrap the story and their romance in a pretty bow, but treated as an organic part of their relationship. The way it should be! Besides the sheer joy reading about two badasses who are hot for each other team up to take names, not clogging the story up with stupid will-they-won't-they is a GIFT. I can't tell you how much I thank you for it. I also thank you for the way we see the characters grow. It doesn't feel inconsistent or smell like unicorn farts. The way they grow is also especially gratifying. Like the tanning Charlie got. More than just funny, it was satisfaction! She needed to get her head screwed on straight, and that's what happened! There not being an apocalyptic doom dangling from her nose was the fruit in the cake! Anyway, your stories are great. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Omg, just found this story. It is amazing! Love it, love it, love it! Please update soon, I cannot wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() Seems interesting so far. |
![]() ![]() Exciting beginning. I've read some of you other work and I'm looking forward to this new story. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() Oh, you left it off at such a sad part. A sad and seriously messed up part. This story is so good, with just the right amount of drama. You made me tear up here. |
![]() ![]() Damn, I really thought that gangster gave her jewelry, but it makes sense that it'd be something like that. It fits with her personality that she'd appreciate that. |
![]() ![]() Badass! She's so badass, I love her. |