|Reviews for Beige Desperation|
| predisturbia chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Keep writing please :) but you used the word 'desperation' a lot, possibly too much.
| IronicPuppies chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
I'd say that the picture you've painted of Amylace's life is certainly depressing. Not sure about the repeated use of "desperation" though. When I hear desperation I think more about someone who is in a frenzied panic but Amylace seems so incredibly passive.
Depression I can see, but not so much desperation. Anyway, it's some beautiful writing.