Reviews for The School Bully
kellyroyer chapter 38 . 6/3/2016
kellyroyer chapter 37 . 6/3/2016
I was literally squealing with joy when she figured it out and went to him, and I am not a person to use the word 'literally' figuratively. So imagine my disappointment when he said he was still leaving... Like! Okay I kinda understand, what with his father and everything, and I know it's really unrealistic for him to drop everything just to stay with one girl but HELL can I wish? She just said her day started with him! What's going to happen when he's never there? Ugh I guess I'll keep reading
kellyroyer chapter 35 . 6/3/2016
Guest chapter 39 . 5/29/2016
I liked this story a lot but the only thing that really ticks me off is there wasn't much sexual things happening in the story. I mean you had great potential to make this story the hottest, sexiest, romantic, bad boy story ever but you lost it. And it was really unrealistic that Leon waited a while frigging year to have sex wit her I mean a guy like him waiting that long? It doesn't make sense. The second story is probaly going to have lots of sex maybe and I actually really wanted Leon and Sophia story's to have that not just Johns and Terrys. It was just a let down if I'm being honest. Your a great writer seriously you are but you just forgot to add the missing ingredient 'sex'. If you ever write another story of Leon and Sophia I hope it will have that sexual appetite everyone wanted.
Guest chapter 39 . 5/23/2016
I hope Leon and Sophia will always stay together for ever and always xo

The only problem I had with story is there wasn't much sexual chapters and I'm not telling you how to write your story because I loved it but I just wanted to see Leon and Sophia go at it a little more. I'm hoping maybe in the next boom like John, Terry, Skull, Rohan and Hannah catch Leon and Sophia having sex? Or hear them having sex? That would be so funny man haha

I could totally see Skull and Hannah together, I would ship them xo.
ThatReviewer chapter 39 . 5/15/2016
Excited to read about Terry and John 3

Aww im legit crying because it's over. :( tears of happiness and joy all at once! Sophie and Leon will forever be my joy :3

Thank you a thousand dollars because the line about Leon and john's bromance. THANK YOU. I SHIP IT NOT IN A LEGIT WAY (leonSophia and TerryJohn as too cute) BUT IN A CUTE, ADORABLE, BROMACE-Y WAY.

I love you forever for writin my hero! 3

that new story better come on June 1st ;P

Love and kissed and cupcakes and hugs and brownies,


(or TotoDaDog, if you wanted to look me up on fictionpress)




(okay bye for real)

Wait one more thing...

I had a legit dream about Leon x John. NO lie it was kinda funny XD

Bye legit this time ;P
Itsa Mia chapter 14 . 5/15/2016
Uh, I'm sure someone else who speaks Japanese had already commented, and I get that you don't speak it but I just wanted to say that bitch isn't an insult in Japanese. Also, since she's that angry and only half the grammar is way too formal. I say this as someone who's second generation child of immigrants but I have yet to meet kids with perfect grammar that haven't studied their parent's language. I'm nitpicking but there's some things that rin my suspension of disbelief and unrealistic translation is one of them xD other than that I'm clearly engrossed or I wouldn't have gotten this far.
FuriaJump chapter 39 . 5/14/2016
Hello !
Sorry I didn't post a review before :) But I knew I wanted to finish reading this story to say all the things I thought of it !
To be honest, I didn't really have a good impression at first and I thought it was just as cliché as other stories in this website.
I was so very wrong.
You broke all my stupid judgements one by one. I loved the characters who weren't as stupid as I thought but in the contrary, they were deep. Leon isn't a stupid big badass boy, he's just a tortured boy who is very intelligent but don't want to be approached by everyone. Well, looks cliché when I say that but it really isn't, I loved the story of how he had to see her mother raped whilst he couldn't do anything because he was just a little boy. I loved the relationship of Leon and Sophia and even if I don't think it was really realistic in the beginning, she was becoming more and more aware of the things Leon did. And the last blow of their relationship was really interesting, because she couldn't just ignore that and I really liked the way she was truly afraid of the things he would do to her, it was something someone in real life could have done. I mean even if it's your boyfriend, you can't exactly act like nothing else matter apart for your love, right?
So yeah, thank your for the story and your time ;).
"Sleeping with the bully" seem really interesting, can't wait !

Emoji chapter 39 . 5/10/2016
I loved it but I aslo loved your other chapter as well. Your such a good writer. I have read chapter 38/9 like a hundred times, I love it xoxo I can't wait for June! It needs to come right now hehe
crbrgmi chapter 39 . 5/10/2016
I just spent the last 3 days binge reading this and I have to say how amazing it is. I can't wait until the next installment.
KrimsonCrusader chapter 39 . 5/9/2016
After the John and Terry story, I would love to see another one with Leon and Sophia. Like telling about their life after school and if his uncle returned.
WindSongEnchantment chapter 39 . 5/8/2016
Guest chapter 39 . 5/8/2016
Hi. I agree this is a much better ending. In the sequel do you see Leon come back or is the focus on John and terry at the same time as this book.
Guest chapter 38 . 5/7/2016
I loved it! So much. I'm glad they did it at his house first ;) i wanted him to eat her out lol will they be having sex in the second book? I hope so and the second book it's not going to be a love triangle is it? I hope not

What if Rohan likes Sophia? I'm worried that he does :( what will happen. I can't wait for your second book xox
TeamLeon chapter 39 . 5/7/2016
*swooning forever and always*
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