This chapter makes me realize it wasn't love problem making him wanting suicide. I wonder what it was... But oh my god... Reading the part when him broken down made me really sad :'( i think she did great job trying reassuring him despite of not knowing much about depression.
Her inner thought when they almost kissed was soo funny and really hers xDD I even answered "yes yes i know" when she said that she never thought about kissing Iain xD hahah
About Sammi and Jon... Oh that dilemma when we have to put up with someone we don't favor just because related to your friend!
I'm anxious waiting for next update because it was the worst event on her day :s

Your fic is amazing. I like the flow of the words, smooth yet fun

Well I thought it was a nice "breather" chapter. We got to learn a little more about Iain while also getting to take a breath after some of the more stressful events in the last chapters, as weird as that sounds since I know he did confess to cheating on his ex as well as some other drama surrounding that, but anyways...

Her reaction when Iain told about himself is relatable. Sometimes i wonder whether i can ask further or not, but i really want to know! haha Also when she tried not to judge him based on what she had known.
I wonder whether Ian knew what she had felt for him...
She had the urge to do something at the strange time, like opening her eyes when he hovering her! Oh my god... xD i thought it would have been awkward, but guess the good-night kiss softened the blow :)
I enjoy reading this chapter. Excited to read the next one!

The more this goes on, the more plot becomes like something out of an anime, but I'm kind of loving it. I'm curious to see what Iain wants to talk to her about. Hopefully a little about what led him to go up on that ledge that night but I understand if he doesn't reveal a whole lot to her. Baby steps, baby steps

I actually didn't even realize the main character hadn't been named yet. So I guess I really wouldn't worry about unless her name is "Ian/Iain" too.

While maybe not the most ideal way to handle the situation, given her panicked state of mind, it is pretty realistic that she wouldn't be able to calmly think and figure out the best thing to do and just go with the first thing she could think of to keep him from killing himself. Does that make sense? I'm not the best putting things into words so I hope that makes sense.

As for the grammatical side of things, aside from the occasional error in spelling or a shift in tense here and there, it's nothing distracting enough for me to stop reading.

This is awesome. Really like your characterization and how even though the subject matter is dark there's humor and self deprication in the narrator's voice, which is my favorite combo in a story and which I don't come across all that often. Seeing that you first posted in 2014 makes me slightly afraid to watch for frequent updates though. :-S

Your author note is caring one..like it that way...

Very entertaining and intriguing. Really enjoying!

To be honest, I feel that she is handling the situation in a weird way. It seems kind of using him while he is vulnerable. She is not much bothered by his problems. And she didn't had crush earlier on him...and somehow she is hiding info about from her crush/friend in messages...seems silly..and he seems dangerous to me...not the right way to handle these kind of scenarios. Your story telling ways are great..

*gasp* *squeal* yaaaayy new update! Thank youu! :D
I never thought the psychiatrist would have wanted to talk to her too xD The last part is major cliffhanger! I wonder what Iain wanted to talk about... Great to know the next chapter coming soon! Looking forward to reading it! :D

I just reread this story. I hope you will continue writing this story :)

I must read more of this immediately.

I usually read stories on fictionpress mobilesite and the CSS shows up on this chapter. So many parts are like this:
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I don't know why. Normally the CSS doesn't shows up. Please check that out.
Love your story as always. I particularly like the part in the bathroom when Iain finally laughed and even commented about her word of shamditioner. I hope things got better when he saw psychologist.
I'm looking forward to reading your update! Happy holiday! :)