Reviews for Week Long Boyfriend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I really like how the POV is set up and her mindset is pretty easy to relate to. I also enjoy what seems to be a bond forming between the main character and Iain (I spelled his name right..right? Lol). It's looking to be a great story! And I hope to read more! :) Keep up with the good work! *insert a thumbs up here* :) |
![]() ![]() I lov love love this story! I am literally fangirling all over my room because i cannot control my emotions due to all the feels! Okay, now tha I'm done with that, wow. Just, wow. This is so well written with characters that come to live before the reader's eyes. I am honestly a happier person because I clicked on this link. And yes, I should be studying for my test, but I am so glad I chose to this instead. At least this time the procastination was worth it. Thank you so mich for writing this. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, can't wait to read more... Please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are forgiven because i love this chapter much! xD I laughed myself when reading the dinner with Rachel part (glad i'm alone at home now. People would wonder what happened to me laughing when reading on cellphone). Rachel was such a bright person. Then the part when the main character found Iain cried was just really sad :( So his decision to suicide wasn't simply because of his ex, seeing his scars :( I like the idea that the main character's name remains unknown in this story. I myself wonder her name when reading this. Yet you did very good job not confusing us readers although we don't know her name. Your idea to reveal her name at the end of this story was really nice. The serious mystery is Iain's past. The light one is simply her name. :) I'm looking forward to reading your next update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does her name have any significance to the plot aside from being her name? I feel like plots like this one can go really, really wrong, but you've managed to make it captivating and believable. I'm really enjoying reading it so far. Just the Ian/Iain thing confused me a bit...I think I might have to go back and re-read some chapters. |
![]() ![]() I am always genuinely sad when your chapters are over because I want it to keep going. Not in the, "Oh, okay see you next week," sense, but, "Wait, what? But I need more now," sense. This story is so interesting and the main charcter is scrambling to do her best and Iain is so sad, but sometimes showing a small smile...It really gets to me. And these chapters are already lengthy to begin with. Just another thing to thank you for. Thank you for the update and, if I'm being honest, I hope to see one tommorow! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waah... Glad their first date went enjoyable (yay for the photobooth!)! I think it was good decision to tell her friends about what actually happened between her and Iain. I'm happy that you didn't tell everything about Iain in a chapter. It's natural that the female character knew about him little by little as this story is written on her POV. Love that you wrote this in first person POV! Well done! Her thought really shows her personality which is a likeable one. I'm looking forward to your update! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad that she made Iain talk on the way to her friends' apartment. What actually happened between him and the tall guy? Is it related to why Iain wanted to suicide? Many things should be explained and i'm looking forward to knowing them! Also excited to read about their first date! |
![]() ![]() ![]() She must be such a really nice person! My favorite part was when she was thinking in her room. Her worried for Iain was genuine and amusing to me. I wonder what would happen in a week... Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() This looks like such a great story! A little heavy but the main female character has a lot going for her. I so enjoy her thoughts, how she's genuinely a good person (although a little lonely), and then her unconventional way of going about helping this guy. I hope to see more soon. :) |