Ah, so not all the brothers have her best I retest in mind. We'll have to see how it plays out!

Love this story and can't wait to see what happens when she finds out that slimy herald was, in part, responsible for Que's death.

Yay, a new chapter! this is such a cool story, I'm always so eagerly waiting for a new chapter.
This one made me feel so sad for Sigil... the fact that Tiburon is allowed to have 'access' to her and no one - including Sovereign - seems to be able to do anything about it... makes it so clear that she is indeed something to be passed around, and used for sex and breeding... and the way they were having sex with Sov. and Karhl one moment, doing some kissing, and the next she was being told to deepthroat Karhl's cock, it was so sudden, especially considering the nature of her budding relationship with both of them...it was just so crude and disrespectful and messed up somehow that Sov. would do that...just really emphasized to me how she is there to be fucked by all.. and 'trained' like an animal or a slave, for accepting this life as a walking womb... and the way Sov. speaks to her, full-on training mode, pacifying and conditioning her... poor Sigil... wow, this chapter really brought home what the true situation is, and it's not pretty... I'm hoping something sweet and special develops between her and Sovereign, and that she gets to choose who she sleeps with... loving the story, it's very well written... xxxxx

Once more, my eyes are alight with wonder. Sigil shines, nearly as much as this world. It takes on more appeal, every chapter. Though I'm wary of the alpha attitude found in most of the strongest among them, I am intrigued. I am equally interested, to see how Sigil finds balance among them. How day to day life will roll, & what kind of insurgency lies in their anarchists.

Love it! I figured you were waiting to get the story up to date on both sites.

I loved learning more about why Sovereign's sperm soothes Sigil's psyche (ooh - I'm all alliterative today. Say that 5 times fast "Sovereign's sperm soothes Sigil's psyche" - Everybody together now).

I love the details of location. The more you describe the world your characters inhabit the more I can imagine it. I like to know where things are in relation to other things, what they look like, etc.

Curious to see how long before Sigil gets bored, bored, bored with being a pretty plaything. She was born for action, and sitting around being pampered, petted and prayed over is probably going to drive her bonkers. I know it would me. Thank you! Love your story so much!

this was a great chapter and I hope to see more. I also hope that our favorite girl will kill the new asshole Lord commander.

Please please update soon! I'm starved for the next chapter.

Fatastic update!

damn it all, itzy. i came here hoping all chapters were up.
aaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrgggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
i bow to your talent and hypnotic work, oh lady.
:)

I always think of the song Come Undone by Depeche Mode when I read this story...

This is amazing! I have been reading this all day long and I've enjoyed every single second. You have brilliant depth in your characters, and you make us stop and think about their reactions. I hope we get to hear more of each individual's past, to better connect their reactions with their persons. Your wording is also brilliant, and I enjoy the challenge in the words you pick. Looking forward to more, amd especially to the connection between Jerla and Sigil.

I am captivated by this story. Sigil has such a strong personality that she will defy her and the brotherhood's expectations of what her role should be. Although there is much talk of predetermined life and destiny, she is going to forge her own future.

Just one note for editing: The word castigation is used frequently.

Aahh. It does truly feel like the death of Quinn and by the birth of Sigil. You've quietly started referring to Quinn as Sigil. I didn't even notice until I read this chapter for the 17th time. I wonder what other differences we will see.

Love this story, cannot wait for the next chapter! When will it post?

Oh wow.
This story is really good and also really sad. I almost cried when Quinn's head was revealed,
Your world is really creative and your writing really compelling. I look forward to the rest!