Sinfully delicious... Like a quadruple chocolate cake scarfed down after one whole week of starvation..so satisfying and yet leaving one to crave even more... Thanks Itzy.. Please keep it coming...

I love me some more of this Sovereign. Now I understand how terrible but a ruler he can be.

Enjoyed! Thanks!

YES! Sovereign gets a backbone! I love that he has revealed himself this way. Great chapter. I'm still sad about Jerla, though. Please don't let anymore children die. Or Alba! Am I a horrible person to be glad Dryden is dead? He really have me the creeps.

wow oh wow you just bombed me twice today 8'D this chapter was certainly a wham xD I like how more and more things are happening! and goshhhh that last part DDDDD I've been waiting for that for reaaally long that was really fantastic (x love how you always hook me on your story with every chapter. hopefully we'll see Sigil and het mini Sigil somewhere in the near future? 8)

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Interesting that Sovereign shows his true colours and so does Sigil. Tiburon is looking very much like the hero; he knows her better than anyone.

"[I] wait while you fuck my brother" wow...wow. I wonder what he thought in those moments watching her fuck Carl...watching how much she loved it...watching her say "I want you" to someone else. And I just wish there were a little more focus on Sovereign at those times for this reason...Now that we have come to the emotional climax (or an emotional climax at least) Sovereign feels like a background character suddenly stepped up to the forefront. I like the pairing of the two but I'd like his character development to be more than just descriptions of what a badass he is.

I feel as though it hasn't fully registered for her how strong Sovereign is...even after he raped her...until now. I wonder what her psychology will be surrounding that. Will she feel more trapped. Will she love him, or hate him, or both.

Fan theory...Tiburon is Soshiia. Is that crazy?

T_T Give me a moment while I gather my bearings from the ultimate betrayal my heart feels at the change of Sovereign.

I need another moment.

Dang, I still feel awful, and yet part of me is still attached to Sovereign. But I also hate him! Whyy!? I've got some sick vicarious Stockholm Syndrome thing going on here. I just want Sigil to be happy ;_;

First of all, forget anyone who gives you a hard time over this update! I know quite a few people have been waiting for this one, me included.

Second, OMG! What!? You are a demon with these cliffhangers! Not Jerla! No! Oh my gosh, I thought it couldn't get worse after Que but now this! Gah! But hey, maybe Sigil will have another kid on the way. Not that that excuses Jerla! Poor Jerla.

Excellent writing as usual. I cannot wait for the next installment.

Can't remember if I posted, but so so so excited for another chapter! Thank you for the update! Keep up the amazing work :)

I am sorry that fans are being so pushy. Thank you for writing this for us. I am glad Kharl got his time. However, WTH? You can't leave us hanging like that!
You have my heart rate up. Good job ;p

Goddammit not Jerla! This story is too damn depressing for me, real life sucks enough as it is.

Before I even read I just want to say that you all need to remember that the author is doing this FOR FREE she is dedicating time and money and resources to putting this out here for you guys with no reward because a lot of us (I'm guilty of it too) don't even give critical feedback that they can use to grow from. You need to check yourself before you ruin it for everyone

hi! I've been a silent reader of yours for a while now, and I must profess I am fully enthralled by this story and your work on BTBB. How you weave detail into this story makes it worthy of being an actual book that I love to continue reading. Looking forward to the next chapters on both your stories!

NOOOOO! Jerla! Well, fuck. . . .