Yay! A new chapter, I was so excited when I read my emails in my Economics class this morning. I actually don't have a favorite biker, you have written these characters so well that they all play off of each other so well! I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it doesn't take too long. Keep up the amazing work.

I'm going to be honest. It was the title that caught me first, then the rest of the story. I love it!

You really should update far more often it's amazing!

Someone got mad haha. I Just love how it's only chapter three and I've already become desperate for a new chapter the moment I get a notification for the current chapter!

Seriously can't wait for the next chapter!

Kept me reading-good start, has me intrigued to read the rest.

Well this story is good and sweet,the plan and plot is okay gonna look out for it

Great start! I'm super interested in where this story is going to go.

this is really good so far! i like your allusion to alice and wonderland at the end very clever!
if you have a chance could you read my story "shifting through love, i could really use some criticisim