Reviews for PV3 - Lilith X Cain |
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augmentedDREAMS chapter 32 . 11/23/2015 I'm not going to cry... I didn't cry. This was the most perfect ending ever. You couldn't have done the characters more justice and I'm not going to cry over it. I can't... I can't, I can't believe it's over! I mean, I had seen it coming. I knew this was the last chapter but actually reading the end, reading that author's note... It's like a bittersweet reality check. I guess I can understand Angie's decision. (Btw, never saw that coming that was so awesome; where do you get your ideas!? XP) We all knew Angie didn't want to live forever and that would also be too cliché. This was the best. I wonder what they will name New Angie. I can't wait to read what you'll write next, I bet it'll be just as awesome has Vampire Story. This will stay closest to my heart regardless tho. I can't believe it's over. I feel like it was just yesterday when I first clicked on Bloody Memories' link back in 2010. But it also feels like it's been a lifetime since. I feel like I know all the characters personally and feel like I'm parting with a dear friend... I hope you continue writing those Vampire Story oneshots. The DnD one is still incomplete, haha! Words can't convey how much I will miss this... But I know you couldn't have ended it at a better note. Until next time, update soon! (: |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 31 . 11/8/2015 Is this the end? It better not be. I feel like there are only a few chapters left now and I'm going to cry! And when Gabriel talked about the little time he had with Angie. I know it's better that Angie stays human but... Y U DO DIS!? This is one of the few stories that I wish would never end. My love for the characters and their stories overcomes my desire for closure. I don't know what I'm going to do when this ends... |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 30 . 10/29/2015 Lol, that was anti-climatic. But I like how it ended. It makes sense too. They couldn't possibly kill Cain. I wonder if he'll visit them on Angie's birthday though. XD I really liked this chapter, especially loved the way how you switched between POVs. It was like watching a movie. It was totally like watching a movie. I could totally imagine the scenes as they unfolded how everything went on, it was really thrilling. Can't wait for your next update! c: |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 29 . 9/28/2015 Omg. , I am so sorry for reading this so late. That was such a great chapter, tho. For a second I was confused when Angie referred to her 'good leg'. I thought it was her metal one but it was the opposite of that. XD I wonder how she's going to fight Cain without her leg and I'm guessing the one who shot out of the elevator was Sybil? You can write action scenes so well, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 28 . 9/25/2015 It has been so long! I was worried that you had forgotten about us. ;-; Also, my habit of binge reading makes this chapter seem so small. I loved reading this chapter, though. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's like Cain and Lilith just can't leave Angie alone. I wonder if Arthur is still alive. After every chapter all I can think is that you are such a great author. Update soon, please! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 27 . 8/4/2015 Angie's mom coming out but what about Arthur? D: and I loved the part when Gabriel rod Angie of Manigault's influence. What he said was beautiful and completely true. Anyway, no! This was a small chapter and late too. Even though I loved it, I want moar! |
Lizzie Faire chapter 14 . 7/14/2015 I really love how you build things up slowly and boom! it's there, although it was always there, just that we couldn't quite see the last puzzle piece. Like with Gabriel's flash back of "lets kill Lilith" and Angie's dream. Hope to see more of your writing soon! :) |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 26 . 5/11/2015 Wait, who is Lilith's father? I don't know whether I'm disappointed or happy that Angie is not going to be a vampire. I'm both, I guess. XD I was curious to see what would happen if Angie became a vampire. You should make a portal version of this where she does become a vampire. Haha. XD Also, I bet Lilith would be angry now. I can't wait to see what happens now. Please update soon. C: |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 25 . 4/16/2015 Oh my God! Angie's going to become a vampire? But...but... Then she won't be the same. D: Also, Cain doesn't know that Lilith had children? But...huh? Lol. XD I am kind of confused. But oh wow. I loved this chapter, I, this time, really can't wait for the next one! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 24 . 4/14/2015 I can sympathize with Franz. His work comes above all. That's true dedication. XD But I am bummed about not being able to see the results of Franz' experiment. I hope Arthur survives and that he and Vivian have an awesome summer wedding. My favourite part of the chapter was the last part of Vivian's and Arthur's conversation. cx |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 23 . 3/22/2015 Chp 23, What a Clifie! How can you do that to us! Arthur and Smythe and Now this! CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I'm so Glad Gregori wouldn't help Franz Abort Viv's Baby! But what about Franz Breaking his promise! Tut tut! Amazing Chapter! The part where Angie said to Azri, Chris has been rubbing off on you and his reaction was Great, I think Azri maybe does like Chris in that way! I remember he once told Gabriel Angie wasn't his type and I'm pretty sure his type was someone that could of been Chris! As Per Usual though I have No Idea where you are taking this, You Always Shock and Surprise me and your Never predictable! What I Love about your Storys Most! God What an Ending to a Chapter! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 22 . 3/22/2015 Chp22, Was Chris Jealous that Azri was Flirting? I Hope so! I Like those 2 together! Another Great Chapter! Oh Will Angie Never See the Hot Gabriel Ever Again? Willshe Always See a Grey Corpse or will that fade when she loses her "Borrowed" Abilitys that Nympth was talking about! I know she Love Gabriel no matter what he looks like but We All Want her to See the Beautiful Gabriel Again! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 21 . 3/19/2015 Uh Oh, What Secret is Vivian Keeping? You have me thinking that Maybe she isn't Angie's Mum and that Maybe Katrina is her Mum (She looks exactly like Katrina but different hair!) And that, Maybe it's not Arthurs DNA she has but Arthurs Father Who is Angie's Dad! (He did seem like he wanted to keep an eye on Katrina and Make sure she was Safe!), Another Amazing Chapter! Your Work Is 100% Better than it's Ever Been! Your Totaly on Fire with this New Story! Your Work has Always been Great But Now it's like you have several Pro Authors Writing for you! Honestly I Just feel like with Each New Chapter I'm Just Gushing Praise and I'm Not usualy like this and Worse I feel like I'm Holding back so as Not to sound like a Child! Anyway You didn't write much about Chris/Azri but when he wished he Let Azri sit with him It made me think Azri asked if he could, And I Like their Blooming Friendship, It's Great to Read! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 23 . 3/16/2015 Ohhh! Vivian is already pregnant! O: LOL, here I was assuming she was past menopause. xD Poor Smith though. I feels so bad for both of them. Is Franz going to kill Arthur? Wow, I loved this chapter. |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 20 . 3/15/2015 Chp 20, I Don't Even know what to Say except WOW! What an Amazing Chapter! There was just So Much Happening! And am I right this is the other Smythe?, The one who's supposed to be good? Aww and Donovan/Nymph showing up! Better still Angie/Gabriel Etc, All Back! I was starting to think this time it wasn't going to be there Fight! Love Your Work! You ALWAYS leave me Amazed and Surprised! |