Reviews for PV3 - Lilith X Cain |
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augmentedDREAMS chapter 22 . 3/12/2015 LOL, Azri doesn't seem to be very fond of Angie. Might he be jealous? xD I loved this chapter, especially Azri's bit and the last part with Cain. What!? They're feys!? Why are they working for him? Also, why do I have this feeling that you're about to kill of Arthur? Are you though? |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 21 . 3/10/2015 "I'll have to contact Franz, as this is more his area of expertise than mine" Don't you mean Gregory? XD What? What's wrong with Vivian's blood results? o.o and. . . But, but G.S.! I had thought of Gabriel but where does the S come from!? You were right! It was so obvious! , Are they going to the Enoch Industries in the next chapter? Also, is the accident they're talking about Arthur's? LOL. XD |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 20 . 2/25/2015 Wait, Vivian has brothers? O: Oh wow. This is getting so interesting! Angie and Gabriel are finally back in New York, how are they going to react on seeing Callie and on finding out about Vivian? I just can't wait for then to face Cain! XD Oh, and are they going to use G.S.'s sperm? And Katrina's genetic material too? I'll finally know who G.S. is. |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 19 . 2/20/2015 Uh Oh? Whats the Other Smythe Up to? Just Have to Add that I thought your back story on Cain was Great! Loved your Adaptation! Fantastic! This Feels like a whole new book and it's Opening up lots of new Exciting Questions. You Really Are a Great Story Teller/Writer, Honestly your Work is Better than most Published Authors! You Deserve so much more Reviews! I can only imagine that folk are sick of Vamp storys But if they gave your books a nose they'ed be hooked cos your Vamp storys are unlike any Others! The Plot/Characters and your Wrighting combined make an Epic Read, Totaly Addictive! Again Thanks For Sharing! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 19 . 2/10/2015 Wow. Cain's story. Was the woman Lilith? What's Smythe planning? I wanna know more! ㅠ.ㅠ BTW, are we also going to see Franz again? XD Also I can't wait for Angie and the others to make an appearance. As always, I loved the chapter! Can't wait for more! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 18 . 1/24/2015 Damn! I thought he was after Angie! Damn! Poor Viv! Full of Surprises as Always! I Really Can't Wait for More! Sorry I keep spelling Cain wrong i had a dog called Kane spelt with the K and it's habit! Wow Your Wrighting just gets Better and Better! I'm Speachless that was a Great Chapter! What a Character you have there in Cain! Didn't think you could get a Baddie to outshine Dimitri, But I'm Loving his sense of Dark Humour! Though i did love Arthurs retort of "I have Insurance" just as much! Please Update Very Soon that was Too much of a Cliffy for my heart to take! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 17 . 1/24/2015 Tried Reviewing Chp17 before and FP wouldn't let me! But if this goes through I just want to say I AM TOTALY LOVING KANE ADAMSON! What an Entrance! I'm Really Excited about the whole Mark of Kane/ Son of Adam/ Lillith/ Angels thing you have going right now! And Knowing what an Epic Writer you are i know this is going to be Amazing! Again What an Entrance! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 18 . 1/22/2015 Oh no. O: You leave me hanging. I wonder why Smythe needs Vivian... And yay, Callie is back. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter. This story is progressing so well. |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 17 . 12/22/2014 When they passed the 'Enoch Industries' board without noticing, I was all *jawdrop* *slaps forehead*! OMG. Is Adamson Cain? O: and the message from Chris was from A-side, right? When he was going to fight Lilith? XD |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 16 . 12/20/2014 Wrote a review and lost it but it roughly said! Mmmm Dexter what has he got himself into? And Poor Callie, She has had a hard wee life and now this! Plus thanks for the update, Was thinking we'd have to wait until after the Festive season! Really Excited for More on the 2nd Half! I'm also going to do a Re-read of all your other books cos you have an Amazing gift of bringing loads of little tid bits and loose ends from other books and bringing them together to create something Great! So just incase i've missed something important i'm going to do a little swotting up! Anyway Cheers for the update and I just want to say You Really are an Amazing Writer and I hope you have a Fantastic XMas and Hogmaney/New Year! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 16 . 12/19/2014 Forgot to mention this last time. But OMG! Lilith is fey!? Anyway, OMG! Dexter was a mole! But... But... This is outrageous! I'm going to kill him. Just doing his work my foot. No... D: not really. Even if he's on the bad side he's just doing his job. :v And OMG! I bet that the owner of the big ugly building has something to do with all this. I wonder what role Adamson has to play in all this. And how is Cain related to the person after Vivian? Because she's related to Katrina? Because this sounds like it's related to Dexter's task in France. This is so awesome! XD update soon, please. |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 15 . 12/12/2014 The mark of Cain, I should of new you wouldn't leave that a loose end! Damn your a Great Writer! I was thinking that this was a short book and was coming to an end! You have no idea how pleased i am that we are being gifted a 2nd Half! (Like a Early X-Mas gift!) Looking Forward to more as usual! I Loved the Happy Reunion, Much better than if you defeated Lilith! I Really Hope one day your work is discovered by the masses you totaly deserve it! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 14 . 12/12/2014 "This is my last move Lilith, Check Mate! EXCITING! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 15 . 12/10/2014 I bet the VL trilogy box set will be just awesome. O: Papa is Cain? OMG, where does Cain come in the equation? This is so amazing! XD I know this is cliché and probably annoying but, woman, where in the universe do you get your ideas?! BTW, I never expected Lilith to be so nice. O: I love her character. Please don't let Cain kill her. ㅠ.ㅠ All this time I was expecting a cruel old albiet young looking lady just waiting to sink her long claws into you. So, probably it was her influence acting as aa defence mechanism all this while, right? That "troublesome children" part was too her influence going wild. When Angie said that Lilith is always welcome in New York, I could just imagine both of them chilling together at another party. . |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 14 . 12/8/2014 Oh no! Cliffhanger! Is Chris okay!? Man, I'm hating this cliffie. Updaaate DX BTW, is it like Lilith has multiple forms in which she appears? And her true for is impaled by the sword? O: |