Hello Moira...

It's early in the morning and I haven't slept. I wanted to wait until I read this chapter to review (concentration issues as it often happens with me) but I needed to say a few simple things, but which mean a lot to me.

I've already told you about my opinion on your incredibly amazing writing skills, so enough of fan gushing about that :) [Although I meant every word of it]

But what I really want to say today, right now, is that you've touched me more than I could put into words with your stories. I know that life's not always been easy on you and that you yourself can give you a really hard time...Not feeling good enough and all that stuff. And I sometimes wonder if you truly realise not only how gifted a writer you are, but what an inspiring person too. You have so much to give and you seem to give freely, probably without even realising at times, I'd bet.

We've never met in person, but I learned so much from you and your stories. If I had to guess I'd say you're an old soul, wise beyond what even you can comprehend.

I've read good stories, I've read great stories, but I can truthfully say and without any false flattery that none of them moved me and taught me and so much more that your stories. My favourite being - as you surely know- "On the way to ever after".

If I were half as good with words as you I'd try to tell why and how exactly this very peculiar story moved and changed my life, but I don't think I could ever do it justice...

Just know that you amaze me. And Although we've never met in person, I love you... (Ahem in a platonic, sisterly, kindred spirit kind of way - Although I've don't have any problems with Lesbians! - But just so we're clear and I don't come across as creepy :)

(Did you know that when I came across your story I almost did not click on it because of the age difference? That would've been such a big, sorry mistake...All it took was one click..can you imagine that? Life is so...I don't have the words)

are you gonna continue this? It's Beautiful :)

Ok, so this is definitely NOT the in-depth review I promised...it is however an appeal for: more, more, more! (please)...I've been browsing around for something decent to read - good writing and characterisation - but have been mostly disappointed..So I'm turning to you queen of wow-wow-wow writing and characterisation!

Confession time: I read this update several days ago but didn't review until now...tbh I've been exhausted n still am..having some trouble forming coherentthoughts... I'll definitely leave a more in depth review once I've gotten some rest..

Okay, so this chapter was totaly cool, and so much camel-o apperances. I like that.
And those excerpt thingies, what are they in the first place ? Are they some sort of mini series, and do they tell stuff (like hints to the story) or are they just for fun?

And are you realy going to post that entry of Fran's ? And, man Angelo is ( still ) really weird.

And I like Sun- I mean Sam, is she going to be like Lawrence, a side character, but plays an important role?

And, comment, when Fran said "...Kirito used to defeat SAO's big bad..." Um the "big bad "part.. I dunno, it just sounds off for me.I dunno.

Well I guess I'm done
, Mr. Potato

Hey Moira! Thx so much for the dedication :-) That's a great first chapter! As usual your stories are unique and different from others out there!

Angelo is really odd, but I bet he's just insecure..looking forward to read more very soon :-)

Wow, Angelo is a umm... weird. Definitley a tsundere boy.