Reviews for My Soul's Severance
A rose in a withered land chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Momoelle chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
I actually quite enjoyed reading that. It had a very nice rhythm to it, if it could be interrupted at times. It was overall very upbeat, but took a dark turn very quickly. 0_0
I can almost sense the speaker's confusion through the use of imagery. I visualized a beautiful landscape, great job.