Reviews for Wake
augie.toaste chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Woke up to find that you'd written a new story! :)

Great piece, mostly I felt a prevailing sense of dread and despair for poor Grandpa Vasile. Most interesting POV I've read in a long time. :)

Very well written. The only thing that reads a bit weird is a part of a sentence in the 0 section - 'They were battered bronze-marred by generational stains...' feels like there should be an 'and' or a comma somewhere in there.