|Reviews for The Lotus and The Loon|
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/6/2020
| zagato chapter 8 . 9/11/2020
Thank you for the update. I am reading the story. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/16/2020
You updated 5 hours ago but what was the update? I miss this story I really want to see what happened! The last chapter I read was THE biggest cliff hanger EVER!
Hope you're doing good!
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/15/2020
Will we ever be able to read this again? It's such a good story! I can't find it anywhere :(
| Zane Nassour chapter 11 . 7/30/2019
I've notice that TLTL has been removed from Tapas. Iv eaten come back after ages to read it over again and can't find it...has something happened?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2019
I've noticed that the story is gone from tapas... What happened?
| Cielwing chapter 11 . 3/9/2019
Are you planning to continue the story up on tapas?
| zagato chapter 3 . 1/19/2019
I'm surprised that Eden talked a lot in this chapter when she is supposed to be invisible. Atlas may be able to think that since Eden does not want to seduce him, she has a partner whose job is to seduce him. Thanks.
| zagato chapter 2 . 1/19/2019
The king must have used magic to disguise himself from Eden. Nothing should have escaped her observation. Thanks.
| zagato chapter 1 . 1/19/2019
This is a great start, thank you!
| Acie chapter 11 . 4/29/2018
I tried to find this story elsewhere but no such luck... Now I'm sad
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/18/2018
Congratulations, I hope this is working out for you. Please let us know when you publish the book - ebook or print because I would love to buy it
| Acie chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
It's I can't find this story anywhere. It's not on FicFun or anywhere so help me
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/29/2017
Ugh just so much excitement where do i even-
This chapter gives me life
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/29/2017
Again i really enjoyed this. The banter between them is super entertaining and i get so nervous for Eden. I was laughing to myself imagining that Atlas was going to pull her hood down or something and Edens reaction would be to punch him in the nose. Sorry for the random thoughts haha but its 1am and i am loving this too much. Your ending note was quite sweet too, good on you.