Reviews for The Lotus and The Loon
infinite101 chapter 16 . 12/12/2016
Ahh another awesome chapter! Thank you for the update, I'm glad Eden felt comfortable enough to sleep I'm sure she was exhausted. I can't wait to see how things develop further, looking forward to the bed chapter :)
LoreLorelei chapter 16 . 12/12/2016
This was such a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read more!
Bookworm chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
An update! I absolutely loved this chapter. It was all Atlas and Eden and I loved it! At this point I can find no faults in how adorable they are. I also can't wait to meet Hugo. Something tells me I'm going to like him, and it might have to do with forcing Atlas to meet him at a brothel and to wait for him there.
notjustink chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
I love seeing the dynamic between Loon and Atlas start to shift. Also, this chapter contained many different facets of the storyline seamlessly which was lovely. Keep it up!
JaeHee27 chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
Thanks for the update and welcome back! I do really appreciate each chapter because it is all about the developing relationship between Atlas and Eden. I am so worried for Eden. She is in such a compromising and terrible situation because of Thetan. Eden is confused I bet. And Atlas is such a sweetheart. Always looking out for Eden and trying to understand her. I love it all so much! Can't wait for the next update either! Happy writing! :)

- Jae Hee
Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
Love it! Can't wait for more!
infinite101 chapter 15 . 12/11/2016
I loved the dialogue between Atlas and Eden - this was brilliantly written and I'm eagerly anticpating the next chapter :D

I hope you and your family are all well, wishing you all the best
The Lovely Orange chapter 15 . 12/3/2016
Great chapter! Please feel better soon!
Spectre chapter 15 . 12/3/2016
I read your profile, and have an important question. Are you Shantorian?

WindSongEnchantment chapter 15 . 11/25/2016
Congratulations on the surgery, hope everything goes well on your next one. I recommend eucalyptus and spearmint essential oils for your stress. Can't tell you what a lifesaver those are!

Loved the chapter and can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/25/2016
Loved it ! Hope that you recover well and that everything goes well for you and family !
Waiting for your next update !
Neonpink chapter 15 . 11/25/2016
Wow! You have done awesomely again. I even love waiting for your story, not as much as reading it though!
The way Atlas is slowly getting closer to Eden is really beautiful. Can't wait for more. ..
A chapter 15 . 11/21/2016
Glad you're feeling better after your surgery ! And luck for the next :) waiting for the next chapter !
Guest chapter 15 . 11/20/2016
Hope things get better. Thank you for the update.
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