Reviews for The Lotus and The Loon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh another awesome chapter! Thank you for the update, I'm glad Eden felt comfortable enough to sleep I'm sure she was exhausted. I can't wait to see how things develop further, looking forward to the bed chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() An update! I absolutely loved this chapter. It was all Atlas and Eden and I loved it! At this point I can find no faults in how adorable they are. I also can't wait to meet Hugo. Something tells me I'm going to like him, and it might have to do with forcing Atlas to meet him at a brothel and to wait for him there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love seeing the dynamic between Loon and Atlas start to shift. Also, this chapter contained many different facets of the storyline seamlessly which was lovely. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update and welcome back! I do really appreciate each chapter because it is all about the developing relationship between Atlas and Eden. I am so worried for Eden. She is in such a compromising and terrible situation because of Thetan. Eden is confused I bet. And Atlas is such a sweetheart. Always looking out for Eden and trying to understand her. I love it all so much! Can't wait for the next update either! Happy writing! :) - Jae Hee |
![]() ![]() OH YES FINALLY SOME ROMANCE! WOO. great chapter! |
![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the dialogue between Atlas and Eden - this was brilliantly written and I'm eagerly anticpating the next chapter :D I hope you and your family are all well, wishing you all the best |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Please feel better soon! |
![]() ![]() I read your profile, and have an important question. Are you Shantorian? O_o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on the surgery, hope everything goes well on your next one. I recommend eucalyptus and spearmint essential oils for your stress. Can't tell you what a lifesaver those are! Loved the chapter and can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() Loved it ! Hope that you recover well and that everything goes well for you and family ! Waiting for your next update ! |
![]() ![]() Wow! You have done awesomely again. I even love waiting for your story, not as much as reading it though! The way Atlas is slowly getting closer to Eden is really beautiful. Can't wait for more. .. |
![]() ![]() Glad you're feeling better after your surgery ! And luck for the next :) waiting for the next chapter ! |
![]() ![]() Hope things get better. Thank you for the update. |