|Reviews for The Lotus and The Loon|
| Zane Nassour chapter 20 . 7/12/2017
Oh Hom, I didn't realise this was the last chapter that you are allowed to post! I'm so sad! Thats ok though!
I've loved what I've read!
| Ilsa with an I chapter 21 . 7/12/2017
Okay, done. I have now created an account for FicFun solely because I love your stories so much. Fan that flame, but know that even if you don't win, your writing is fantastic. I've followed a couple of other writers from here out into the published world and bought their books, and I'm 100% confident that you will become one of them. You will find a way.
| Zane Nassour chapter 16 . 7/11/2017
Still, I am obsessed with this story. Your structure, grammar, dialogue, and your ability to engage me as a reader is to be greatly commended!
| Zane Nassour chapter 15 . 7/11/2017
Still loving this!
| Zane Nassour chapter 10 . 7/11/2017
Oh my, I love this so much! Can't wait to read more!
| Zane Nassour chapter 5 . 7/11/2017
I'm still basically ADDICTED to this story! I can't stop reading, must continue! :)
| Zane Nassour chapter 2 . 7/11/2017
Ahhh, I think I'm in love with this story! I love it, more than I can say right now! I think you have potential to be a proper, famous author! Thank You for writing this, its amazing to know theres so much more to read, and that Im not coming to the end! I'll continue reading now!
Continue doing what you love!
| Zane Nassour chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
Oh my, I've only read the first chapter and I love it! Also, I read your latest update-the authors note, and voted for The Lotus and The Loon on FicFun! Im loving this story and I plan to read the whole of it!
Continue doing what you love! :)
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 20 . 7/11/2017
Oh my god this story is really coming together. I don't even know how to review this story because everything is just consistently good; characters, plot, romance, setting, writing, everything. I'm just going to say I can't wait for more :)
Also I'm really loving The Lotus and the Loon cover on FicFun! I love the colours!
| Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 21 . 7/11/2017
Yes! I am so supportive of this decision! You go girl! Grab your dreams! I'll definitely be reading The Lotus and the Loon on FicFun and voting whenever I can. I love this story more than most published teen fiction. Your characters are always three-dimensional and have their own problems and ulterior motives. The setting just comes to life on the page, especially this story. I love the whole tropical island fantasy vibe going on here, its so original compared to the overused fantasymedieval Europe thing. Also that their god is a physical being, and its some kind of whale shark! Also loving the slow-burn- but-not-to-slow romance and I'm always down for the clueless-in-love trope (*cough* Eden *cough*). The plot is well paced and it's lovely and realistic and if you don't win the FicFun competition I will cry because this story deserves to be published! And famous! Sorry I rambled, but Good Luck sweetheart. You have my full support!
| Sigy C. Artyn chapter 21 . 7/10/2017
Omg that's so awesome! Well done, you :) I can completely understand it, really - I've always had the same kinds of doubts and they're really pretty hard to dispel :/ for me, going to uni and doing well there (with a lot of hard work) has made me finally really believe j myself, and I'm really glad you've found something similar!
So of course I'll support you! Keep at it, I'm proud of you! :)
| whatcouldpossiblygowrong chapter 21 . 7/10/2017
| oh-my-wizard-g0d chapter 21 . 7/10/2017
Will you be uploading the rest of the chapters on FicFun? Right now it only has up to chapter 12. When will it be caught up to fictionpress? Will the new chapters actually be chapters that have previously been on fictionpress? I love this story and was very excited when I got the notification of a new chapter and I am now just wondering when the next chapter will be out! I have voted on ficfun and good luck in the competition!
| Pseudonym59 chapter 21 . 7/10/2017
Ahhhhh good luck in the competition! I've already cast my vote for TLTL - best wishes and best of luck!
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/10/2017
Fan your flame! Woo! I do think that you will rank high. I'm an avid reader and I adore your story! I'll be reading and voting for you :)