Great chapter! :) Looking forward to the next!

I loved that first paragraph. Really beautifully written. I can't wait for more of this!

I apologize for the late review. I've been so busy! But I finally found a few minutes to catch up with this story and I'm so glad I did! Loving the way it's going, the ending was so sweet. I can't wait for more! :)

Like. This. Alot.

Hey! I've come to really like this. I'm falling in love with Ezra ! I wish there was someone actually like him. I like the girls character. Shes intriguing. Pls update soon!

Great chapter! I'm really loving these characters, and I like your dialogue - it works really well and flows nicely.

Just a tip! I'd be careful with using shorthand terms like "u" in a story, unless it's in a text or something.

Looking forward to more :)

This is such good stuff :) Ezra is certainly intriguing!

The grammar errors are a bit distracting, though, especially with the dialogue. For example, there should be a comma inside every quotation - ['So I've heard' I said smugly.] should be ['So I've heard,' I said smugly.]

But despite that, I can't wait for more!

Great update the chemistry between them is electric. So looking forward to the next chapter!

Ezra, Ezra, Ezra, I can't wait to find out more about his character. Great chapter, I can't wait for more!

I really like the story so far. The fact that she has a Bengali background is a nice touch. The protagonist seems to not believe in marriage or is afraid of getting hurt. I like Ezra a lot ! Enjoying this so far !

Hi thegirlinthelibrary
I would be happy to review! I think you have a great plot and characters. Something I noticed is your transition from scene to scene could use some work. They are not seamless they tend to feel a little abrupt. Easy fix I think but overall enjoying your story.

I don't usually like love stories, but then again, this one isn't about some teenager with purple hair, cutoff shorts, a magic belt with a sacred sword on it, magic amulets powered by emo behavior, and freakily dangerous love triangles between impossibly sexy boys. I like the fact that this guy is attractive to everyone, but only REALLY special to the main character.

This story left me hungry for more, mainly because the characters exhibited restraint, and their emotions didn't equal rolling around kissing on the ground the first time they met. The main character is of a racial minority, which gives her an ethnic character that is very unique and appealing. That hinted tragic past is very effective in defining her personality and behavior towards new men, especially at the point where she suspects Ezra of playing her to get in her pants.

The one criticism that I have is that your grammar and spelling are a little off, and, especially in Chapter 1, I was confused at points where the subject and object were mixed up. For example, I had to read the passage about Aunt Marge several times over, because it sounded like she was in love with the grandfather! I highly recommend you use a spellchecker on it. Once you fix that issue, this story will be exceptional.

Overall, this is the best contemporary love story I've ever read, and I have to thank you for restoring my faith in the genre.

I think this is a great start to the story! Really interesting and well thought out characters, and a very promising storyline. My only criticism at this point is that there was quite a bit of missing punctuation, but that's easily fixed by a quick proofread. I can't wait to see how the story progresses!

Hi again :) aw the biryani thing was so cute! I really enjoyed the chapter!

I really loved it! There were a few misspelled words and punctuation errors, but the story itself is awesome and i wouldn't change it at all. I can't wait for another chapter!