Reviews for I saw myself that night
Eugene Onegin chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
This is a haunting poem, and I mean that in the best possible sense. I love the image of the shredded bible and the capitalization of EVERYTHING. Well done.
wandertogondor chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
The intensity and that sense of having everything at stake is very apparent and very effectively done. Especially how you slowly had the rhythm soften. Very good job on having the word "suddenly" stand alone as if it was the beginning of the end. I heard a slow thumping in my ear as I was reading this. Very intense.
RedWineAndAmbien chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
This sounds familiar to me - the ever present need to overthrow the authority/figures! Like the tone of this.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
You've got some wonderful imagery and intensity in this piece. The idea of a self scattered into the wind, and ripping the bible with locked eyes are both fantastic. I also think you've done an excellent job with the punctuation and line breaks, although I am not sure about the all-caps on the last word. I think "everything" may be more effective on its own line, and is striking enough without the capitalization.
Thank you for sharing!