I’m so sad you haven’t updated this amazing story in so long. I’m very picky when it comes to these stories and this story has managed to avoid some really common cliches. I love Layne so much. He’s my favorite character. I love his strong will—at least his attempt at it whilst being threatened by Sir. I just hope for the day he and Blythe escape from Sir’s clutches. I have no idea if you will ever update this again but I sure hope someday I can reach the conclusion of this fic. It’s so good!
Good luck updating. I’ll be waiting for that day :)

You should really update this. It's so good. You can't just end it here. I'll be sad if you do.

You can't just end it like that :( I need to know what is going to happen next. So please update :D

please update :) this story is sooooooooooooo good

Yeah, this is gonna suck no matter what. "He wants me to hurt you and fuck you hard until you cry or he'll do it himself."

Crap...whatever he's going to show him can't be good.

Seriously Layne, do you honestly think he didn't try to escape sometime in the five years he was with him? ...and just after I thought that, Blythe explained that he did try to escape in the beginning.

Pretty little head...well, he does think him pretty. As much as he calls him a tool, he's drawn to him, it's obvious. Hang in there, boys.

So...are you sure this is supposed to be 'saving Blythe' and not 'conditioning Layne'? Layne's pretty clever to think of the code possibly being upstairs somewhere. It's crazy, though. He's worried about Blythe and we're worried about him!

dammit fictionpress...why don't you allow me to copy and paste stuff for reviews? oh well, the kid who's name we don't even know yet...who was just bashed upside the head after turning the corner of an alley? well, he's not off to a good start already, poor thing.

Well, fuck. Blythe is the other kid. Two precious kids...trapped in a 'sleeping' cell and monitored by a camera. Brings to mind the matrix somehow. Yeah Layne, anyone'd be freaked out after seeing how conditioned blythe was.

Yeah, don't know who I feel worse for...Layne for expecting someone as broken as Blythe to react or Blythe himself. Damn, why wash them with ice cold water? Seriously? I'm wondering how Blythe hasn't caught Pneumonia from the crazy cold baths, too.

This is the first story that makes me feel pity over someone wanting to help someone else.

Please write chapter 7

My gosh, the plot thickens & you're at it again. This was such an intense chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!

no no, don't you dare, no nooononononoooooooo. DAMMIT! This is me reading this story with its cliffhangers. This story is so addictive but I only have the one chapter, and I want more and oh my god. I love your stories. I also love the way Blythe seems to be slowly letting his guard down to Layne but chapter 7 I'm guessing will probably bring us back to square one, which I love cause then more story, Yay!

This story is so good, and so sad at the same time. I can't stop reading it! Man oh man this is torture just reading it because I want Layne and Blythe to get out of there and away from that guy because he is freaking crazy! Please update soon, I have to know what happens next!

I'm curious about Sir,I know he's a sick fucker but I'm really curious on how much affection he does have for Blythe