|Reviews for Lie|
| The Exiled Sinner Repents chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
This was AMAZING. I love it. You have a gift.
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
This is a very interesting piece, your structure and word choice work well. I feel there is a deep sadness and loneliness in this here that almost sounds as if it speaks from experience. I truly hope this isn't so for you. It's a real feeling of betrayal when this actually happens and your piece describes it very well. Keep Writing. FC