Reviews for Saturday Memories
Taint.Revile.Elude chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
I liked what you were going for, that whole the past is directly tied to the present feel, but I'm not sure you reached the mark. I find myself wondering what any of it means, how it could possibly be relevant, etc. Maybe, in the next chapter, we can land in the middle of the action, less in the past, you know? I think that's what was missing, no action to hook me just yet. I think there is something interesting there, however.
Addicted2music chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hey this was very well written. I'll admit I wish it had more of a hook for a first chapter, but I'm going to follow it and read the next. You've got me hooked with your good writing. Looking forward to the next one!