Reviews for The Tipping
msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
I don't quite know what to say.

I suppose I'll start with...this made me laugh a few times, which I suppose was your point, haha. However, this was supposed to be a Young Adult/Children's Fiction entry that followed the tenets we discussed in class. I don't see any of those tenets here.

On a positive note, I enjoy your way with words. Careful word choice made this story better than it probably should be! :)
David Riegle chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
It was a nice story some problems with verb tense and wording but other then that not bad.
jrwils628 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Good humor, but when i read the story i kind of thought you were trying to rush through it. Slow down next time and include more details.
Katelyn McCallum chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
This story seems to have been written for no reason other than making the reader laugh...and if that was the goal, then it has been achieved! Although there is a lot i could say on the downside...not a very developed story line, not very drawn out. It just seemed to lack a foundation, but you made me laugh so that is an upside for me!
laurendiebert chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
I love the unique names and the randomness of the cow tipping. Then laser tag at the end after they landed in the poop just tied it together.
JoshuaMabus chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
This is a funny kids story. It has a good setting and plot. I found it funny when they go to tip the cow and the cow got revenge on them.
Nathan219 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
It needs more explaining in the gap between when they fall into the poop and when they get caught by the farmer. I feel like we would understand what went down more and why they won't go cow tipping again.