I don't quite know what to say.

I suppose I'll start with...this made me laugh a few times, which I suppose was your point, haha. However, this was supposed to be a Young Adult/Children's Fiction entry that followed the tenets we discussed in class. I don't see any of those tenets here.

On a positive note, I enjoy your way with words. Careful word choice made this story better than it probably should be! :)

It was a nice story some problems with verb tense and wording but other then that not bad.

Good humor, but when i read the story i kind of thought you were trying to rush through it. Slow down next time and include more details.

This story seems to have been written for no reason other than making the reader laugh...and if that was the goal, then it has been achieved! Although there is a lot i could say on the downside...not a very developed story line, not very drawn out. It just seemed to lack a foundation, but you made me laugh so that is an upside for me!

I love the unique names and the randomness of the cow tipping. Then laser tag at the end after they landed in the poop just tied it together.

This is a funny kids story. It has a good setting and plot. I found it funny when they go to tip the cow and the cow got revenge on them.

It needs more explaining in the gap between when they fall into the poop and when they get caught by the farmer. I feel like we would understand what went down more and why they won't go cow tipping again.