I liked the dialogue in the story

Beautifully written! Your use of descriptive detail really sets this apart from other stories of loss. You find beauty in the smallest things and point them out to the reader.

A small mechanical suggestion - capitalize your 'I'

Wow that was powerful i felt that right in the feels

Really nice sensory details throughout the story! I even cringed a bit when it talked about how her mother looked sitting by the tub. A very dark story, but I still liked it.

I love how you took a different turn. Everybody thought of happy stories to write and you went in the opposite direction. It shows your not afraid to do something different. And the story was very impressive and I enjoyed it.