I really wish this story would continue. It is so much fun to read. :(

halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Pevita an editor for a fast growing platform, i am so interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?

Really missing this story.

You can’t do this to me. I just started reading this and I’m already at the end. Please dear god tell me I’ll get to find out the end! *crying desperately*

I'll never stop checking back here hoping to see another update. You've done such an amazing job so far, I have to know what happens to the characters.

Hope you are well.

Hope we will hear good news from you soon :)

Looking forward to hearing more from A&L, as always.

Best wishes

You know. Usually it's me that's recommending lewds to others. It feels kinda weird when it's the other way around. Well at least that lead me to finding out that there was a sister site to FF so it's worth the weird feelings I guess. In the mean time all shall tremble as the mighty Starscream has graced his presence upon this site!

You big tease! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hoping you have a eureka moment soon :) take care

We all go through writer's block. Don't worry. Let the work rest for a while, open your mind to every other things (movies, music, other books) and suddenly (well for me) you'll have a 'oh, I want to write that'.
After all we all inspire each other. It'll come back just don't force yourself :)

You're still one of the best writer I know and I love your universe. Also don't concern yourself too much. Write about what you want to say, even if it's bout of happiness for your characters, which is rare in stories- we often write struggle over struggle. It's good to let them bond and live normally for a little too.

Take care of yourself with everything that happening too. Hope everything is alright.

xxx

LOL! Not much to say on this one. Although I do have to say that this was a rather entertaining "intermission" chapter from the usual goings on in the story. It made me giggle as some of the random as hell thoughts that Lucille was having. Hehe. Well done that. Looking forward to the next full chapter. Take care and have a good one! :)

Until next time~! :D

Hey there! Glad to see a new update for so long. I got delayed in reading it, but let's get into it! :D

Hah! Not 5-minutes in, and those two lovebirds are already pawing at each other. Hehe. It's sweet, funny, and erotic all at once. Honestly, as far as "make-up sex" goes, those two could not do better. Especially with all those sweet-nothings they were whispering to each other. I know I've said it before, but I'll say it again; I love their relationship. It always has me rooting for them. And the hot steamy sex those two have that dulls out any pain she may have? Icing on the cake. ;)

Anyways, after their steamy, impromptu tryst... What, again?! LOL! Well, she has gone without for a while, and the WAY she got stimulated is rather... interesting. Heh. :P Still, when they came off (NOT A PUN!) their high, things turned serious. It was quite easy to forget that this was their break. A calm before what is sure to be the storm of her next phase of her training. A very important one, if they hope not to repeat the mistakes of the past.

All in all, this chapter was a welcomed installment, despite not moving the plot along. Those two seemed to have finally moved past the revelation of his "business", as heavy as it was. For that, I am glad. Though there is still some room for a bumpy road ahead, as always I look forward to more, and give this one a nice 8/10. :)

Until next time~! :D

As always! Wonderful! I liked the sentimental part of their joining this time. I can't wait to see where this leads.

Hey there! I'm glad that you were able to get a chapter out before the close of this year, and just before Christmas no less. A nice little gift there, so let's get into it~! :D

Aaaah, yes. One part of their relationship that I thought in the corner of my mind was missing; the make-up sex. It was nice and steamy, especially since it had been a while for the two of them. Of course, perhaps Lucille was a little too overeager, since she forgot to hold off on her energy. D'oh! Ooops... Well, like Aleron said, perhaps her future training to use her energy as a weapon to defend herself will be able to help in her focus and control. Last thing either of them need is for Aleron to go nuts and become a wild sex beast. :P

LOL! Wow. That was funny. Lucille playing around with the dormant spirits by moving around the chairs. Well, it IS her vacation, so she's got to have some fun with it. Though I found Aleron's reaction to her antics to be amusing. Also, good thinking ahead on Aleron's part for stocking up on food supplies ahead of time. Huh. Even though he technically doesn't need food, I suddenly got the mental image of those two sharing a romantic dinner with each other. Huh. Odd that. Well, that'll likely be after what I can assume will be a romp at the waterfalls. Hehe. An obvious joke is there, but I think I'll refrain. ;)

All in all, a short but sweet chapter that shows that things are slowly but surely mending between them. An upward tread that I hope continues. Until then, this one gets an 8/10 from me.

Take care, and have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year's. :)

I love this story so much.

Hope to see a new chapter soon... Make it an early Christmas present? :b