Reviews for Diabolic Lover |
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![]() ![]() Your note at the start got me a little worried which prepared me for the worst. So the happenings of this chapter were not as bad as I expected. I actually thought it was very interesting, I suspected something like this would happen sooner or later. Can't wait to read more :D |
![]() ![]() Oh dear I was afraid of this! I hope they can repair this but the damage of not feeding may bee too much. I wish this updated every day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() he cheated in her... she better fuck him up... Like I know why and all, I mean its pretty much what I would do considering his whole being and existence is to feed sexually and he cant really survive without that but still.. fuckin irritates me damn lol. Lucille i feel so bad but then again I'm glad this happened. This story needed a little bit more raw drama other than the fact that she could turn him into a sex craved lunatic. Their relationship needs some ground rules, Think Lucille thought they were together and exclusive and he probably didnt but damn! You got me on edge, no need for apologies, It is your story! Cant wait for more and see what happens! I like Claire btw lol shes cool. thanks for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait to see what happens next. It was bound to happen with Aleron not feeding just glad she was able to stop him in time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaaassss! To that servant! And about the door being locked, obviously it was a good idea because if she really had planned to listen wait until the party was done, she wouldn't have even touched it to know it was locked in the first place. Maybe that's just me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omgggggghhhghhggghhgggh I'm glad you revealed her age. Her behavior makes more sense to me now. She's lacking in experience with so much besides just men at that age. But at some point she'll have to realize that she isn't in her world anymore and she can't keep pushing her human standards on to him just because he was a little kind. She should have dropped her expectations at the door once she made it to his realm where he has an overwhelming advantage. Non humanNon human actions. But I could cut her some slack because she's young. She doesn't flesh her thoughts out well, which will always lead to disappointment for her. I almost feel like I'll end up reviewing every other chapter today while I finish this lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...that was stupid. She cannot be serious. I could smack her. I just feel like her brain has taken a vacation for the last 3 chapters. At this point I could honestly say that she's completely addicted to Aleron. I wouldn't call it love because she doesn't know a single thing about him, but addiction is the only way I could see her dropping everything, with no preparation (making up some excuse to your friends, family and job) and leaving. Especially because she never even asked if she would be able to go back. She also lacks a sense of self preservation. The dude just scared you out of your mind and told you that under NO CIRCUMSTANCES are you to leave the room because you risk getting mauled by a less nice incubus. And yet here she is fleeing to God knows where when the place is crawling with them. To do what? Cry? She could do that in the closet if she needs to hide that bad. Just STAY WHERE YOU ARE! Ughhh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow so yummy now i know what to do when my husband isn't around ke ke ke wifey! just kidding honey |
![]() ![]() ![]() im enjoying this fic...kkkk |
![]() ![]() Ooh an anime convention.. I recently went to a comic convention. It was pretty awesome but I think an anime one would be better |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm happy for Lucille, finally gaining some control. Can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So great! At least some progress! I'm waiting impatiently for next! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my word, I am really enjoying reading this story. I could not even leave a reply on each chapters. The plot is gripping, intriguing, sexy and mysterious. Just the right blend to keep the readers attention. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is amazing! Keep up the fantastic work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update quicker next time please! xD loved this chapter |