I actually thought this chapter was very interesting! Something different and refreshing to get more of the plot :)

im gonna have to ask you to write another chapter please! its getting interesting , thies two are become more "normal" in a sense..

awesome writing keep it up!

Omg I'm addicted ️ Can't wait to see what she is :D

Loved it! Great chapter :D And congrats on the words yay

Now I'm really curious on what Lucille may be. I feel like her dad may be a demon or something to have Lucille be something else.

Wooooo! This is now a novel, online story :D

this story is so well done that i just cant stop reading, even when i don't normally read such explicit things such as this, a testament to you skill as a writer.

keep up the amazing writing!

I love how Aleron's character has grow! This relationship is amazing

I completely love this and would love to see it in amazon!

AHH what could Lucille be? I can't wait for the next chapter!

?! what the fuck do you mean she isn't human?! that's crazy talk...right?

Dun dun DUUUUN! I figure Lucille must be something else than just a human (or so she think she is). I feel like she wouldn't want power over Aleron because, well, she loves him.
Also, the dialogue between Aleron and Asmodeus switched around when they were saying how delicious Lucille is. It was strange because Asmodeus never had Lucille, right?

Loved this chapter, please update sooner!

I never say no to a free e-book haha ;) Anyway, amazing chapter! I am so curious as to what Lucille really is if she isn't human.

Loved it!

Pleeeeease update sooner the anticipation is killing me!