Reviews for Diabolic Lover
Mad-Dan90 chapter 63 . 7/11/2019
Oh, boy. The aftermath. I knew that this was going to be a tough one for Lucille, so let's get into it...

Her initial reaction is completely and totally understandable. After all, she learned some pretty heavy stuff. No sane person could blame her for her reaction. Which made me swell with pity for her. Poor girl. And weighing her options didn't help matter either. She's more or less stuck with her current situation. Though thankfully its a situation where the incubus that she loves and cares for, does the same in return. :)

Her questionable choice of comfort food aside, at the very least the chapter ended on a somewhat hopeful note. Even though they still need to have THAT talk. Honestly though, I was half-expecting Evera to pop up, since last we saw her, she was owed a something for telling Aleron about where Lucille is. Maybe next time. Since this chapter was definitely not the place for whatever her shenanigans will be. :P

All in all, short but still not less riveting. Especially since I'm so well invested in their relationship. This one gets an 8/10 from me.

Until next time! :D
Guest101 chapter 62 . 6/21/2019
ooooo boy! lucille's home! yay! so all's well rite? no? fuvk! kinda shity but guess it wuz expected? i mean, aleron issa freakin incubus, so maybe we shoulda expected this. but whats gonna happen now?! they can't break up at this point! but no way aleron can stop his business. it'll make 'em a target to other incubus! an wut 'bout evera? will she try to take advantage o things an get her "payment" aleron's D, or from lucille? the suspense is real!
Mad-Dan90 chapter 62 . 6/20/2019
Alright! I read this update as I was just about to head to bed, so I'm only now able to leave a review, so let's get into it! :D

I am sooooo glad that Lucille is on the mend now. Interesting "doctor" that they found for her, and oddly enough I'm actually the Doc makes a few more appearances. Which seems likely since Lucille still needs time to heal, and hopefully fade those scars out of sight. Although it's obvious that psychologically she'll need a great deal more time to recover from her ordeal. Though thankfully Aleron is there for her to lean on during this time, and his own admissions to his true feelings was quite touching and heartwarming. Though the following scenes would be rough... :/

Oh! The detail about Lucille learning of a way to better defend herself was quite interesting, though I worry what Pharzuph might ask for in exchange for those lessons. Also, hehe... Well, well. Don't know why I'm surprised that Aleron gets saucy romance novels for Lucille to "relax" to, but it was a pleasant surprise regardless and an interesting detail too. The fact that Lucille "pictures" Aleron as the MC in them is also quite a nice detail. Heh... But it wasn't all wine and roses afterward, as they finally had "The Talk", regarding Aleron's business. Although it went down like a ton of bricks, much like I expected, the details given to the inner turmoil of each character was well done. Lucille as a human, and Aleron now being in love with one. Where the backlash from this will go, I am VERY interested in seeing how this gets resolved. Although one thing that is left hanging in the air: where is Evera, and just WHAT is going to be her reward for helping in the rescue, despite her earlier mistake.

All in all, despite the short length, the chapter was engaging from start to finish, with me hanging on every word, wanting to know what was going to happen in the aftermath. Now I am eager to know what's going to happen in the aftermath of the aftermath... if that makes ANY sense. Regardless this one gets a solid 8.5/10 from me. ;)

Until next time! :D
Skye Blue Meadows chapter 61 . 6/9/2019
I just got done reading the update and wanted to say that it was another very good chapter. I love this story and cant wait to see where it goes. Thank you again for sharing your story with us.
Darkangel Guard chapter 61 . 6/3/2019
As always, your work is marvelous. You'd really have a lot of fans if you want to publish one day, on Amazon for example
Just wanted to point out that Aleron seems to have a very, very useless foolish staff hahaha it makes me laugh in despair all the time XD
Can't wait for the next chapter ! At last this fucker is dead.
EpsilonEridani chapter 61 . 5/31/2019
Love it. That's exactly what I hoped would happen to Eranel.
Mad-Dan90 chapter 61 . 5/31/2019
Yes! An update! A little short, but that's alright! Let's get into it! :D

Whoa! I expected there to be a fight of some kind, but I didn't expect it to be quite THAT brutal! Whew! Of course, despite Eranel being quite out of his mind, I can see why Aleron was not keen on fighting him. If it wasn't for the love fueled rage he had to rescue Lucille, he may very well have lost. A scary thought to be sure... Still! Aleron would have made Kratos PROUD with that finishing move! Hah! But damn! Eranel's head still needed to get disposed of poste haste... And is it just me, or did Aleron dispose of said head in hell? O.o

Yeeesh! Regardless, the hard part came when he had to take her back to their home. She was in bad shape, and while he may be an incubus, it's not like he has the power of sexual healing. So he had to be reeeeeally careful with her after her ordeal. Also, nice touch with him appreciating the human faculty of coping with these new feelings he's experiencing. Even more so than when she stupidly ran away that one time. It's plain to see he's having trouble dealing with these types of feelings. And now all he can do is sit and wait until help arrives.

All in all, despite the short length, this chapter had my heart racing from start to finish. As usual, I can't wait for the next, and so this one earns an 8.5/10. Whew. Now to come off the adrenaline high. Seriously, this is the second story this week to get my blood pressure running... :P

Until next time! :D
Laisai chapter 60 . 5/28/2019
I just read this entire thing. It's impressive. Some parts were very... uncomfortable. The sex with Eranel, even if it was training and technically consensual, lacked enthusiastic consent. Which made it very disturbing; Lucille's reaction reflected that.

I also was worried Aleron was a sex trafficker as soon as he mentioned he had a business and clients, along with his familiarity with Daisy's demon ... because what else would a sex demon naturally turn into a business? And. Well. It seems I was right.

You have a pretty good way of balancing the fluff of dating a sexy demon and the realities of how awful demons are supposed to be, which often gets ignored in stories like this. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Guest101 chapter 60 . 5/18/2019
noooooo! not lucille! that's just wrong! someone save her! and that succubae? i like her but i have mixed feelings. she did help with the kidnapping, but maybe if aleron was less of an ass to her she wouldn't have done that. but she did fess up and tell him where to find her. huh. maybe she does deserve some reward. but wut kind? and wut the hell was eranel on about? the suspense is real!
Skye Blue Meadows chapter 60 . 5/19/2019
I just got done reading the latest updates and wanted to tell you I really liked it. I have been following this story for some time and it never gets old. I love the characters and plot and cant wait to see where this story goes. Thank you again for sharing your story with us.
Mad-Dan90 chapter 60 . 5/17/2019
An update so soon? Great! Quite the unexpected surprise to be sure, so let's get into it! :D

Well... holy shit. Things got complicated and heavy REAL quick! My hunch from last chapter actually came to pass. Although Pharzuph was wholly ignorant of what had happened, it's any wonder his credibility was... strained. Especially when Aleron was pissed and worried sick. Thought reason won out, all that happened was completely understandable and believable.

Holy... buckets. Now THAT has got to be a rather SCARY scenario to be sure. Lucille was basically kidnapped, completely unawares, and forcibly teleported somewhere else. Also, nicely done with those details of a forceful/hasty/sloppy teleport leaving the human in a confused state. I had TOTALLY forgotten that little detail from previous chapters. And I had ALSO forgotten about that succubus from the beginning. With the way these events are playing out, it's like everything is coming full-circle here. Nicely done that. ;)

Anyways, Eranel is DEFINITELY off his rocker. It's subtle, but you can tell that while he was an arse in his first appearances, he is definitely NOT the same person, demon, he was before. Even the succubus that had helped him saw he was howling at the moon. Oh! I like that succubus. I want to see more of her. Anways, it's any wonder she left to fetch Aleron. Though not quickly enough it seems. Yeeesh. Now THAT was rough reading. Fine job with that. Still, at the end Aleron was able to arrive, but not before received some pain and drugs. Not to mention letting out a surprising revelation about Aleron. And then... oh come ON! O.O

Whew! All in all, this chapter had my heart pounding from start to finish, and kept me on the edge of my seat. Nice! Although the cliffy will dock you some points. Heh. Sorry. Although I am VERY eager for the next installment, so this one gets an 8.5/10. :)

Until next time! :D
Guest101 chapter 59 . 5/7/2019
lol! lucille almost saw her daddy's 'D' and got all embarrassed! lmao! is it weird i kind of find that cute and adorable? :-P
but wah happened at the mansion? wut happened at the end? the suspense is real!
Mad-Dan90 chapter 59 . 5/6/2019
YES! An update! It's been a while, so let's get into it! :D

Well, well. Eranel has been making things tense around the happy couple's household without even being there. Just by being in the same dimension to them. Yeeesh. It's like he's taunting Aleron, and by extension, making Lucille's home-life more difficult. Huh. What a spiteful arse. Though it seems that wasn't enough to dampen the mood for some nookie, as both Lucille and Aleron got some hot naughty time in. Well, that's what WOULD have happened if it wasn't for that ill-timed knock at the door. Heh. Perhaps they should hang a "Do Not Disturb" sign at the door. :P

Obviously that would not have mattered, given how serious that situation was. Aleron made a good call by taking Lucille to Pharzuph's. At least until they could figure out what the heck was going on. Also, hehe. Him walking in the room in the "condition" he was in, and Lucille's reaction, was freaking PRICELESS! Hah! I loved that! As for Aleron, my heart was literally pounding when he was searching their home for anything out of place. I loved the details of his home, and as I had imagined, that place was HUGE! Seriously, they either need to move, or maybe start filling the place up... HUH?! No! I seriously HATE cliffhangers! O.O

Oy... Well, all in all, this was a good chapter. You built up the tension nicely, and it hung in the air like a bad aroma throughout the reading. Nicely done that! The cliffy would've cost you some points, if not for the fact that no matter what you did, it was always going to end like that. So this one gets an 8.5/10 right out the gate. ;)

Until next time! :D
Guest chapter 58 . 3/15/2019
So glad you started updating again! I'd given up checking after the long break following the chapter which ended at the concert on the resort... Came back tonight and there were so many new chaptersssssss! So pleased. Great work as always, you're so consistent with your characters and style of writing.
Mad-Dan90 chapter 58 . 3/3/2019
Well this was a pleasant surprise. I was not expecting an update today, but I'm definitely NOT complaining. I'll take any update I can get. Even though this one was a tad brief, but more on that in a moment.

I really do have to admit that, as much as I enjoy the sexy bits, I really am quite fond of these calmer moments where the happy couple can just relax and chill. Well, almost chill, because bad news seems to inevitably come in the middle of the night. As usual, Aleron tries to deflect, but fails horribly. Hehe. Oh, well. At least those exchanges are somewhat endearing.

In any case, Lucille got her answer, and despite the brief upset, their evening was able to go back to a peaceful one. Although I would have to give Aleron credit on the fact that he was able to cast such a wide net of surveillance on their realm. It seems he has quite a bit of influence, and again that makes me wonder about his particular "profession". I'm sure it'll be revealed eventually. At least I hope. The author is a CHAMP at the art of the tease. ;)

All in all, despite the relatively short length that makes me wonder if this would have been better suited as part of a larger chapter, I still enjoyed it, and I still love the characters. Speaking of which, that assistant really needs a name. And perhaps Lucille would benefit from chatting up the other servants from time to time. It would be interesting to be sure. Anywho, this one gets an 8/10 from me. :)

Until next time! :D
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