Reviews for Diabolic Lover |
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Guest101 chapter 54 . 10/16/2018 just caught up to all these chapters and i'm luvin' it. Never thought i'd be into a story like this but like surprises. pleez keep it up! that party with the hot demon girls sounds wicked! must have more of those! |
Mad-Dan90 chapter 54 . 10/16/2018 Well now. This was quite the chill chapter, and another one that I enjoyed. :) Seeing Lucille flustered at the lack of a cell phone quite the enjoyable moment if I do say so myself. Hehe. Still, it was nice that she has some budding friendships with some of the ladies at the resort. Although, the tension created by one of her friends by looking for her and speaking to Aleron without her own incubus present makes me curious as to the etiquette and protocols in demon society. Something Lucille shares with the reader no doubt. Then came the actual night out. I will admit, it wasn't the "girls night out" I had imagined, but it was still pretty cool with that outdoor concert with friends, despite all the other guests being there. Oh! Also, those demoness singers were very cool and unique to each other, and given the descriptions, very attractive too. In fact, for a second I though Lucille had a tinge of attraction, but that's probably just my male hormones acting up. Heh. :P All in all, a relaxed and enjoyable chapter to be had, although there were subtle hints to be had for future events that still has my plot-sense tingling. Namely, Lucille's friend Daisy with those bruises on her neck that were definitely NOT hickeys, Aleron's somewhat friendly chat with Daisy's albino demon, his continued dodging of what his "business" entails, and whether or not Lucille can even hang out with her new friends without "chaperones". I will definitely be looking forward to the answers to these questions as I give this one an 8/10. Would have rated higher, but the chapter was a bit on the short side. But considering the fact that you were sick, that can easily be forgiven. ;) Until next time! :D |
Mad-Dan90 chapter 53 . 9/23/2018 Very nice! I'm glad to see Lucille have a semi-normal outing without all the heavy stuff weighing down on her. Well, except for the alcohol, but we'll get to that in a moment. :P Anyways, despite the lack of snoo snoo, I felt that this chapter was a refreshing change of pace. We got to see the duo being casual, and just enjoying a regular good old time. A vacation in every sense of the word if I do say so myself. And I am happy for them for it to. We got to see more of Aleron's considerate side towards Lucille, and Lucille's own somewhat endearing awkwardness while we are at it. Quite the awesome combo if I do say so myself. ;) And ah yes! The alcohol. It was beyond humorous to see her try and stomach (literally) alcohol of demonic origins. Although, I am left to wonder if that bartender put something into her drink, or if I am just naturally paranoid when he comes to prepared drinks from incubi. :P Regardless, glad to Aleron helping her as she starts, "praying to the porcelain alter." Heh. Been there myself, although I am EXTREMELY thankful that it has only been a few time that's happened. Only thing I am left to wonder though, is that incident with that albino incubus and his woman. Daisy I think her name was. She seemed to speak the language, but clearly something was amiss. Hmm... My plot-sense is tingling... All in all, a great read and I look forward to another one like it. I am hoping that Lucille's "Girls night out" will be a good one, and she can brush up on her social skills. I give this one a solid 8.5/10. :) Until next time! :D |
Guest chapter 52 . 9/15/2018 Any chance of an update soon? I keep checking back early because you say you want to put them out faster, but then find myself disappointed :( |
Guest chapter 52 . 8/24/2018 Ahhhhh it was so good and worth the wait. Congratulations on your pass, thank you for juggling your studies and this wonderful story you're sharing with us all! We all love the characters and your writing. Hope to hear more from you soon |
Mad-Dan90 chapter 52 . 8/23/2018 YES! An update! I'm so happy I could get a hard-on! No. Wait. That was due to the writing. ;) And whoo boy! That scene in the pool was awesome! I was also surprised by Aleron's restraint, but he is a very smart incubus, and one that very much WANTS he lady-love to succeed in her training. If nothing else so she won't every have to know someone else's touch. Will things play out like that? We'll have to see. I for one am rooting for this couple. Always have. :) I'll be looking forward to things as they enjoy their vacation and mingle with the people. It's has been a while since she has interacted with other people. Maybe she can make some friends while she's there. As fellow humans whom are with incubi/succubi, I'm sure she could benefit from their perspective. Although, I am left to wonder, has she learned to control her energy enough to "mask" how special she is from the other sex-demons? I would hope so. I doubt very much Aleron would have her around there if that wasn't the case. Maybe he says a word or two about before they mingle. All in all a very satisfying update (ignore the pun :P), and one in which I happily give a SOLID 8.5/10. I hope you are able to find the time to bring out the next soon. Congratulations on your certification! Until next time! :D |
Guest chapter 51 . 8/18/2018 Please update soon! |
Guest chapter 51 . 7/30/2018 Another great addition, I'm hooked. Hope your exam went well, and that we'll see another update very soon! Eeeekkkk |
Guest chapter 51 . 7/22/2018 Another great chapter (congratulations on reaching #50 by the way!). This is the only book I've ever read in this format, because, well, I'm super impatient. But I literally check back constantly for new chapters of your story, and don't think I'll be able to stop until it's finished! Thank you for doing such a wonderful job and making it worthwhile :p |
Skye Blue Meadows chapter 51 . 7/20/2018 I just got done reading the updated and wanted to say I liked it a lot. This vacation spot sounds amazing and I cant wait to see what happens with Aleron and Lucille. I will be looking forward to your next update. Thank you again for sharing your story with us. |
Mad-Dan90 chapter 51 . 7/20/2018 Whoa. Very nice. A vacation mini-arc sounds like a great idea. Especially if they will get to interact and mingle with other people at the resort. Color me intrigued and interested! ;) As usual, Aleron is being cagey, but then again that is part of his character now isn't it? Heh. :P Oh, and both of them are terrible teases! Of course, I fully expect Lucille to win this game of sexual chicken. The image of Aleron crawling into bed as he enters her dreams whilst teasing her body automatically floated up to my mind's eye. Hehe. But anyways, a very relaxing and chill chapter, and I am looking forward to their days of R&R. Until next time! :D |
Skye Blue Meadows chapter 50 . 7/11/2018 I just got done reading this update and wanted to tell you I liked it. I cant wait to see what happens next in Aleron and Lucille's relationship. I will definitely be waiting for the next update. thank you for sharing your story with us. |
Guest chapter 50 . 7/6/2018 Sending you so much luck for your exam(s). Another great read, can't wait for the next chapter already! |
Mad-Dan90 chapter 50 . 7/1/2018 Whoa! That was a nice, surprise scene in the hall. I approve. :) Still, Aleron let slip one small, but crucial detail: he had been in constant contact with Lucille's father this entire time. That really does beg the question, what the hell is been going on behind her back? The plot thickens, really does sum it up. And now we have more than one reason to come back. So many Mysteries just hanging in the air, teasing and tormenting your readers for answers. Oh, I'd be irked right now, if it wasn't for the fact I've used the same tactic in my own work. :P Oy. Lucille and Aleron are being just a little too nonchalant about this. I have a feeling that this is going to backfire spectacularly on them, if Lucille's training is not completed. O.o Still, besides continuing / finishing her training, we now have a number of other things to look forward to. I just hope that these two are able to finish things without that other idiot incubus showing up again. Ugh. I felt the same as Aleron. I too wanted him dead. Whew. Anyhoo, good work as always, especially given the last minute way you were able to upload it. Take care of yourself and good luck on your certifications. I'm sure we are all rooting for you. ;) Until next time! :D |
astoria chapter 24 . 6/24/2018 HAHA I WAS CORRECT |