Reviews for On My Mind
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Impacting and understandable. very nicely done. I interestingly just moments ago wrote and published a piece on here along a similar line, mine takes it a little further down the road of hurt; but either way the path seems very recognizable.

Mines entitled "Changed" if you fancy a read you may find it interesting. It's all fictional perspective, but I hope I've captured it as well as you. See what you think?

Very Well Done.

Keep Writing