Reviews for The Contract
Ggggirl chapter 20 . 4/3/2017
Pleaseee updateeeeee!
slcjnk2008 chapter 20 . 4/8/2016
I love that you are moving this story forward. This chapter so works for me. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 19 . 4/8/2016
I think this chapter explained a lot. For me it created a more well developed and detailed picture of both Elna's and Sebastian's emotions creating well rounded characters with all too human frailties. Great story, great writing. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 18 . 4/8/2016
OMG! Best chapter ever. Enough said. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 17 . 4/8/2016
As a reader and not a creative writer, I thought this chapter flowed beautifully. But I still think Sebastian is being a jackass towards Elna. Great job again. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 16 . 4/8/2016
Oh no! Elna's in trouble now. What else can go wrong? - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 15 . 4/8/2016
Oh how I am enjoying this story. It was good to see you writing more in-depth backgrounds for your characters. Elna is really having a difficult time managing her emotions towards Sebastian don't you think? I'm off to the airport with them now so I'll see you after the next chapter. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 14 . 4/8/2016
Poor Elna, she's unable to get out of such tricky sexual situations with Sebastian. I think she's falling for him and I'm proud of her for learning how to make an omelet - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 13 . 4/7/2016
What's up with this Garrick and why is he determined to stir up trouble? I loved how you wrote their dance scene. Their feelings are really beginning to surface. I wonder what you will write next chapter. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 12 . 4/7/2016
You are painting a picture for your readers and you are doing it beautifully. Without these details your story would not be able to come to life for your readers. And speaking for myself, I'm glad that for a little while, I can share in Elna and Sebastian's world. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 11 . 4/7/2016
I love it when the girls go shopping although I think Lali has a thing for shoes. But seriously this chapter just demonstrates your attention to detail and character development which is awesome. I also like that you are showing their budding attraction to each other. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 10 . 4/7/2016
Your writing is terrific so please don't be so hard on yourself. Although I do know what you mean when you say you want to improve your writing. The thing about an outstanding writer is that they always strive to improve their writing. It is a life-long process and you do it so well. And by the way, I really loved this chapter. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 9 . 4/7/2016
OMG! I'm feeling the terror. I even had to take five minutes to calm myself down. What is going on with Elna?. I'm onto the next chapter to find out. Outstanding writing. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 8 . 4/7/2016
God I love Semira. You did a wonderful job in creating such an amazingly in-depth character as Semira as well as Lali and Curtis's characters. I'm so glad to see that Elna has such great friends that stand by her. Great chapter once again. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 7 . 4/7/2016
You make writing a story seem effortless even though I know how difficult it really is. Thank you so much for this story. It is one of my most favorite stories that I will look forward to 're-reading once you have finished it. Great job. - Shelley
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