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I love that you are moving this story forward. This chapter so works for me. - Shelley

I think this chapter explained a lot. For me it created a more well developed and detailed picture of both Elna's and Sebastian's emotions creating well rounded characters with all too human frailties. Great story, great writing. - Shelley

OMG! Best chapter ever. Enough said. - Shelley

As a reader and not a creative writer, I thought this chapter flowed beautifully. But I still think Sebastian is being a jackass towards Elna. Great job again. - Shelley

Oh no! Elna's in trouble now. What else can go wrong? - Shelley

Oh how I am enjoying this story. It was good to see you writing more in-depth backgrounds for your characters. Elna is really having a difficult time managing her emotions towards Sebastian don't you think? I'm off to the airport with them now so I'll see you after the next chapter. - Shelley

Poor Elna, she's unable to get out of such tricky sexual situations with Sebastian. I think she's falling for him and I'm proud of her for learning how to make an omelet - Shelley

What's up with this Garrick and why is he determined to stir up trouble? I loved how you wrote their dance scene. Their feelings are really beginning to surface. I wonder what you will write next chapter. - Shelley

You are painting a picture for your readers and you are doing it beautifully. Without these details your story would not be able to come to life for your readers. And speaking for myself, I'm glad that for a little while, I can share in Elna and Sebastian's world. - Shelley

I love it when the girls go shopping although I think Lali has a thing for shoes. But seriously this chapter just demonstrates your attention to detail and character development which is awesome. I also like that you are showing their budding attraction to each other. - Shelley

Your writing is terrific so please don't be so hard on yourself. Although I do know what you mean when you say you want to improve your writing. The thing about an outstanding writer is that they always strive to improve their writing. It is a life-long process and you do it so well. And by the way, I really loved this chapter. - Shelley

OMG! I'm feeling the terror. I even had to take five minutes to calm myself down. What is going on with Elna?. I'm onto the next chapter to find out. Outstanding writing. - Shelley

God I love Semira. You did a wonderful job in creating such an amazingly in-depth character as Semira as well as Lali and Curtis's characters. I'm so glad to see that Elna has such great friends that stand by her. Great chapter once again. - Shelley

You make writing a story seem effortless even though I know how difficult it really is. Thank you so much for this story. It is one of my most favorite stories that I will look forward to 're-reading once you have finished it. Great job. - Shelley