Reviews for The Contract
Guest chapter 19 . 1/19/2015
I'm thoroughly upset with Nico, he's not even trying to be understanding. I'm also upset with Sebastian though .-.
kiwi8fruit chapter 19 . 1/19/2015
Wow this ended so seriously and sad! And it's leaning in a scary direction of domestic abuse. Not that I wouldn't read it, but I would hope it'd be resolved eventually.
Guest chapter 19 . 1/17/2015
This is really good I want to see what happens next!
7nan chapter 19 . 1/13/2015
Love this! I'm shocked that there's not enough reviews for this. It's well thought of and extremely written. What's your updating schedule like?
mylittleprincess chapter 19 . 1/13/2015
amazing ! can't wait for next chapter.
PoshKimberlee chapter 19 . 1/12/2015
Good chapter ,
Damn that hurt me too Elna not just you . when it came to Sebastain saying he didn't hire her for a relationship well eff you too . I get Nico point of view and Elnas but Nico took it TOO far bringing up the abuse pass and saying she was patheic but never this pathetic was really mean spirited . Hope you get your creative juices flowing again So you can feel more inspired to continue the story .
smrae chapter 19 . 1/12/2015
Oh man this chapter was definitely sad but very well written. Seriously this story is so different and unique that you do whatever feels right. You did not lose your muse this was a tough chapter to write. Elna is in a very vulnerable place and this was an emotional chapter. Now she needs to pick herself up and I hope she finds herself again.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/11/2015
Please update soon! I check just about everyday to see if you have a new chapter up! Can't wait to see what happens ... Please update! Fantastic story
mylittleprincess chapter 18 . 1/4/2015
GREAT CHAPTER! they really need to talk.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/3/2015
I think that Elna should let Sebastian know about Drew. Then he would understand why she is the way she is.
conti siegel chapter 18 . 1/3/2015
good work! keep it up! :D
Alexcat58 chapter 18 . 1/2/2015
Yikes! Don't be to hard on yourself! I think this chapter covered a lot of ground regarding the boundary that was crossed between Seb and Elna. I don't think you could have done it differently seeing that you have other chapters planned out. Elna has changed, maybe a bit more complacent? Is she afraid of Seb? Is she back to the old self we don't know about? I think this shows Seb that she matured and maybe it's just what she needed, or was it? If all these questions are raised over this chapter, then consider it a job well done! Really excited to see where you are taking this! Sometimes people give to much at the wrong time, this is for both you and the characters for this story. You have paced the story well enought to give us something to think about and Seb along with Elna just need to get their crap together! Keep up the amazing work! P.S the discription of how Elna was feeling was awesome!
lalapop1 chapter 16 . 1/1/2015
Daaaaaaaaaaamn, shit hit the fan!
About your concerns, I thought it was completely in character, especially Sebastian. So don't worry about that. The dialdogue was believable and I do wish there was more of it in all chapters, you did great with it so don't be afraid to explore that :)
Can't wait for mooooreeee!
Get well soon :)
Alexcat58 chapter 16 . 1/1/2015
I am pissed off. Is this normal?! You did a great job with the dialogue and how Sebs work comes into play. Shit just got really complicated...and more real than it could ever be. I don't think Elna really realizes her actions, though natural, may have consequences that involve her image as well. You did a great job! I'd suggest having seb and Elna have a clear real talk about all these issues. I feel like its just mixed signals with them.
PoshKimberlee chapter 17 . 12/31/2014
Wow I've never seen Sebastain utter so many curse words , he's VERY angry at Elna . She's freaking stupid , she wasn't thinking at all , and she's not comprehending how much she had messed up . Which is making me upset at her too . You can tell Sebastain is jealous and possessive of Elna and don't want her kissing or touching no other man , that's why he came up with those new rules/demands . I wish your chapters were longer , I hate when it's getting good and then it ends :( . To be honest I skipped the business meeting part Lolol I was eager to know sebastan reaction .
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