Reviews for Shift
knitted web chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
xXMsBloodyMoonsxX chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
I loved this so much! :) I loved the detail you put into it. It made the story come to life.. I was able to picture everything. The snow, the leopard jumping into the tree, the fight between her and the bear as she protected the baby. This was truly amazing and fun to read. I will admit though, I thought it was sad when the mother of the baby left her own child behind as she ran from the bear. :\ However, I also thought it was awesome how the leopard protected the baby herself when she had realized what happened.
P.s- I think how you had the animals talk amongst each other was pretty darn epic too. :) Also, this story kind of reminded me of some of the Mythology stories I had to read while I was still in High school. I enjoyed those stories as well. .
Anyways, you did a super great job with this! I loved it tons! :D